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Old 04-08-07, 11:37 PM   #1
The_Legacy
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Yo I used to Rap Constantly but then I stopped for like 2 or 3 years so Let me see what I have...


Yoo I was gone there...for a minute or two
But now Im back...To see what I can do
Imma spit and let you handle it
If you want I'll even let you rip the shit
I need help. And Im aware of that
Everytime I battle, Its like a mini combat

Im clutch just like Big Papi
Spit a couple a lines and all the girls want me

Now They used to call me the Big O
but then it changed to the Big No
No Skill, No Flow, Pretty soon a No show
So I quit but Im back on the horse
New name, same game, hopefully a new course
I want it back, Everything I had
I thought I rapped cause it was just a fad

God only knows why i Quit all of that
But just like Mase people yelling Welcome Back







Comment Honestly and Try to help....

NO LINKS NO FEED

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Old 04-09-07, 12:12 AM   #2
Clokworx
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yeah man i can connect, same shit goin on with me. i stopped rappin for couple years, and now im gettin back into it. but that was not that bad. couple lines just make sure that you get enough words in so that it sounds well structured. but other than that i liked it, doesnt sound that bad. new course line was pretty dope. im sure once you get back into it, itll come back naturally.
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Old 04-09-07, 01:17 AM   #3
The_Legacy
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Thanks Man... Anyone else wanna add anything?
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Old 04-11-07, 07:36 PM   #4
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i quit for a while to..2 going on 3 years to be exact ....and now im trying to get back in to it to....been writing every once in a while and i haven't touched a mic ....freestyled...or any of that for the last 2-3 years...so i know how u feel....decent flow too.....i give it a 6/10......keep working on it and im sure you'll get your lyrical abilities back.....work on multis...punchlines....etc...im sure u know what all those are but if u dont send me a message and i'll help you out....good luck

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