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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
04-08-07, 02:23 PM
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Chris Cassius & XL - MC's
IP: EDD9 B6A7
http://www.soundclick.com/artikulate
1st verse - XL 2nd verse - ME Feedback: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3156530 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3156528 |
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04-09-07, 08:47 AM
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New to RV
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IP: EDD9 B6A7
uppppinnnnnnnnnnn
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04-09-07, 12:48 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: 3011 7E9C
word up i remember doin that scary movie shit with you when i first was startin off....lets see how much you upped ya game.......
you still forcin some shit for the sake of your lyrics, n its bringin ya flow down a bit....at the beg...you still got pretty ill punches....it was short...which was lame, bump that up anoter verse or two i was just gettin into it.... not much wrong here cept at the beg of your verse it was a bit forced....your gettin more comfortable on the mic tho....your quality is a bit better n what not....i like this, its a nice lil joint shoulda been longer tho..... rtf on LIGHTS OUT
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04-09-07, 09:50 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 48E8 2135
yo man wuz not feelin this joint at all.......ya flow wuz weird quality wasn't all there........but yo man i peep'd ya Triple Threat Pt 3. shit is hot.....ya verse wuz nice a lil choppy but ya delivery wuz nice on it.....just add more syllables to maintain a constant flow.....aiite fam......
pz ~1~
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