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04-09-07, 06:23 PM
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New Jack
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the life i chose
IP: 3299 9A42
Put a gat to my head and expode my brain
Trying to live and maintain But im living through pain Got mood swang Daddy calls me insane Probably thinks Ima cut myself with a switch blade Never a clown I don’t try to entertain Just trying to let my lyrics stick to your membrane No change Still living in pain and bmore is where I remain no money cause i came from poverty, cops watching me, cause they said i fucked up some bodies property momma said if i wanted to do something aint no stopping me but if i do anything with my life do it properly Music is a art to me like pottery This wasn’t the life I chose this was the life I was given Niggas sinning real emotions are hidden Im not trying to be the best im just tryin to be the realist Im the illist Fuck any nigga that don’t feel it |
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04-09-07, 06:26 PM
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New Jack
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IP: 3299 9A42
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04-09-07, 09:25 PM
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New to RV
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IP: F618 C57D
Yo,
I thought this was ok... It seemed pretty basic but for the most part flowed well.. keep elevatin and try using more multi's and metas.. Maybe peep some of the tutorials on rhyme schemes in the tutorial section. All in all its all love here. Stay up. |
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