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04-30-07, 09:29 PM | #1 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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TeamOne - NewsFeed
IP: 04C7 1AC3
New TeamOne track... havent been around here in a while... this is a straight up mess around pop/rap song, on some kind of "My Band" type of shit, but everyone seemed to love it wen we performed it.... and im sure if u guys are in highschool or college ull really understand ALOT of this song. hahah
TeamOne Music Intro: All 3 1st verse: Entee 2nd Verse: Gallant (Fux) 3rd Verse: Robkilla Hook: Entee and Robkilla You should check out some of other of our tracks while you're on there. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=241774 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3163786 |
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04-30-07, 10:47 PM | #2 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 3011 7E9C
i feel you ripped off my myspace girls song....haha jp...basically the same thing just w/ facebook....songs like that do get good responses live tho...i used this beat n you actually structered the hook the same so i think its dope hahah....nice song i guess...just feel the first two sound the same voice wise too much
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05-01-07, 01:33 AM | #3 | ||||||
Herb
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IP: 4F59 896A
lol I like it , dont know why but it is catchy, I actually liked it lol. Its funny as hell. lol
Good job lol the flow is what does it for me. curious what kind of recording setup do you use. it was mixed down nice. |
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05-01-07, 03:48 AM | #4 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: 74C0 CAA4
Quality is really nice specially for mp3 format. Flow on the first was pretty good and I liked his delivery. Lyrics were lackin a little bit. voice isn't really hittin for me but he can sing on the hook better but he sounds like a boy band singer no offense. Second dude was better. Delivery was better and the voice was better. Lyrics were pretty good and everything was just better pretty much.....you sound like a rapper...again hook sounds like a boy band hook the beat sounds boy bandish too......last verse uhh..it was straight....iono i couldn't really get into it....the flow and the way they thought out the way they'd flow with there lyrics sounded good though. Overall this person had the best structure with his flow........
Iono Im not realy feeling this......It sounds really boy bandish....no offense...but this kind of seems like a goofy song......sooo iono i could like it if i was in a differnt mood like they say music can reflect your mood... woord not a bad track but in the mindstate im in I aint feelin it 1 |
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05-01-07, 07:24 PM | #5 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 04C7 1AC3
hahha yea... the point was it was suppose to sound like a boyband-type track... hence the opening line of "TeamOnes Back ALRIGHT"
but yea, i would get why some people wouldnt really feel it... i think if u were in that D12 or Eminem "goofy single" mood u would like this alot more... thanx for the comments |
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05-01-07, 07:25 PM | #6 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: B4EB 5C31
good beat for this type of track...story telling...boastful almost
eminem type style, IMO... pretty good hook...needs a catch tho flow was solid good track dawg 1 |
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05-03-07, 01:54 AM | #7 | |||||||
The Most Feared Gang!
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IP: BE84 E5C6
this shit sounds like some white boy shit
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05-03-07, 07:38 AM | #8 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 04C7 1AC3
thanx for listenin to my music and uppin my thread. appreciate it.
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05-03-07, 07:46 PM | #9 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 5768 1881
Lmfao, TEAM ONES BACK, ALRIGHT!
Lol @ the facebook line..This shit is illllllll yo..On some creative shit. Hook is funny and creative, def. feelin it. Fux comes in pretty nice, energy is nice, creative lyrics, flow is on point..Lol @ the breakdown..Rob Killa comes in nice, flow is crazy..Hot song here. |
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05-06-07, 10:47 AM | #10 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 04C7 1AC3
uppin.... and ud be surprised at my current set up.... theres no sound proofing or anything, with a dented mic... hopefullly thatll totally change in the next couple of weeks
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05-13-07, 03:58 PM | #11 | ||||
FuxJustAWord
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IP: 04C7 1AC3
uppin............
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05-13-07, 04:01 PM | #12 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 8A60 97E8
flow was nice.. beat was coo.. this shit was tyte good clab here...
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