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05-22-07, 06:44 PM | #10 | |
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intro is good i like it, kidna bone thuggish verse 1-good flow, emotion and shit...only thing that might need work is lyrics, throw in at least 1-4 punchlines in that shit chorus-nice verse 2-flow is iite, mainstream as hell so of course lyrics need a lil work...still not bad tho, original flow in a few spots verse 3-best lyrics by far...decent flow but prolly needs more emotion just fix up the quality yall rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242282 |
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