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Old 08-09-07, 11:28 PM   #1
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TORNADO I Have a bolder twist from my shoulder to my wrist

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TORNADO I Have a bolder twist from my shoulder to my wrist
And boys wanna be holders of this they try kiss
Me and stuff have rhythm in my organisms brisk
Clever, hot and keen like lever on slost machines boys
Boys pull me down try hit jackpot my act hot like toys
They got a trick up their sleeve loking for a chick to squeeze
So I be quick to leave when they ask for some, a cool breeze
Massage the large wet hairs around it just make me sneeze
Magic like inspecter gadget need to investigate this matter
A boy’s cock and devastate a juicy coo-chee served on a platter
And just scatter cum on sheets and yell honey bun you so sweet
His cock a hardcore alarm can even use your forearm in defeat
Trying to push him away oh he jest go crazy suck the blessed gravy
Right out the nipples in the form of milk he jest strom the silk leaving a hazy
Substance running down on the bed spread don’t have to be wise to realize
He cum a lot of cream inside between your thighs girls be so surprised
It happen that way, in bed combat you flock to a fat cock best rcognize
A cock is like the long arm of the law it swarm without flaw like bees
Anyway founded a great toy got a date with this boy went to the cafeteria
And spent some superior time eating and talking my coo-chee hot like diphtheria
Oh he jest wanted to rub and stroke lot of club folks was in here also
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Old 08-10-07, 01:46 PM   #2
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man what kinda bullshit u postin on here?
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Old 08-10-07, 09:34 PM   #3
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man what kinda bullshit u postin on here?


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yo traps....hes gonna tell u "thanks for the feedback"....lmao foreal im not kiddin....


but yeah tornado wtf is up with this shit....i dont know if u just like to come on here and fuck around on purpose or u really dont know what your doing....
and "keep your secrets in the closet"....nobody wants to hear bout this shit...all u doing is setting yourself up.....nuff sed with that.....

o yeah but i'll give u some "real feedback" to help u out.....u need to work on your delivery....it seems u just throwing up whatever literally i mean i understand its a keystyle/freestyle but u should still "think" about what your gonna put down.......
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Old 08-19-07, 06:35 PM   #4
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drop illness cats can't catch on to this at all
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