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05-11-08, 02:13 PM | #16 | ||||
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Got a little redundant in the beginning with the sample just going, could've used an intro to get shit hyped up. Beat was alright, bass sounds like it would beat in a vehicle. The one thing I'm not really feeling is the similarity your flow holds to Lil Wayne...honestly I'm getting tired of that style. Lyrically it seems like you got your point across, some gay cracks but that wasn't 100% of the track like some Q disses I've heard.
So honestly I'm not a huge fan of this track, but I think it works on a more technical level. Got some of my new shit posted too, check it out if you're interested.
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05-26-08, 01:48 PM | #17 | ||||||||
10:23 till i'm 86
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werd, woulda made it a lil catchier but maybe too wayne and too much like everyone else enless u got ya own stye for adlibs, idk.
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06-24-08, 05:44 PM | #18 | |||||||
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