yea i basically have the same view, Kirk murdered it as did Lay. vivid emotion and terrific imagery from both of you

Lay, as Rev said the only thing that could be considered a downside to your piece would be the excessive use of multies. the thing is i cant really call that a downside since all of the multies were used to near perfection. though your imagery could be a little better and i do mean a little, your emotion was outstanding good drop

Kirk, you displayed some of the best imagery ive seen in a while. u actually made me realize why i ever liked reading OMs in the first place.

Dryness so uncomfortable it comforts me but mystic forces,
Make it tough to come to terms with this bliss misfortune

i loved that line man this is an overall great OM drop
9.5/10

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