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Old 02-09-09, 09:52 AM   #1
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Light Weight Title Match: Caustic (2-0) .vs The Original (2-0) (LW)

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Sunday Night: Battles are set up
Wednesday: Caustic 1 bar
Thursday: The Original 2 bars
Friday: Caustic 1 bar
Sunday: Battles Close

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Old 02-09-09, 11:08 AM   #2
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thought I signed out, guess not.

dude seriously, can you even drop a punch that's not horrible
like how you gonna flip The Original with the most played ass punch possible
no wonder you never get pussy, i'll smack you coz I hurt gays
n' the only time you see 'tic in a box, is when he's filling out gay rights surveys
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Old 02-09-09, 01:26 PM   #3
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lol I'll be dropping last minute for sure cause i'm a procrastinator so Ummmmm check
 
Old 02-09-09, 11:08 PM   #4
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It's nothing new, perfectly describes you, a new style'll leave you hurting
seriously if your the Original-- there's clearly a demand for an updated version
 
Old 02-11-09, 11:22 PM   #5
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So what you think my shit played, I are who I is don't get it misunderstood
If I didn't drop Original... Its cause I actually planned on dropping good
 
Old 02-11-09, 11:57 PM   #6
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Thsi was close i thikn caustic had the better verse only because gay jokes and pussy jokes is played but close battle nice hit and caustic i like how you used his name good shit guys.
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Old 02-12-09, 08:17 AM   #7
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It's nothing new, perfectly describes you, a new style'll leave you hurting
seriously if your the Original-- there's clearly a demand for an updated version
I get the punch and it was terribly worded man. It wasn't a good nameplay either because of the style you used here that made your execution a bit stretched.
dude seriously, can you even drop a punch that's not horrible
like how you gonna flip The Original with the most played ass punch possible
no wonder you never get pussy, i'll smack you coz I hurt gays
n' the only time you see 'tic in a box, is when he's filling out gay rights surveys
I liked this flip, it made me laugh coz it was a perfectly worded flip for the most part. Not too creative but the wording was on point which made it hit a little better then it should. Second one was also good, the only thing that I didn't like was the ' that Nick added before tic coz it felt like when newbs try to emphasize thier word plays.. too me that made me stop and be like "Why?" But the punch itself had good comical sense.
So what you think my shit played, I are who I is don't get it misunderstood
If I didn't drop Original... Its cause I actually planned on dropping good
Im call the ghostwriter card on this one. His style switched way too dramatically almost over night and it seems like somebody else wrote it. You dont just switch styles and get this much better. Granted its a played punch(a decent one still) Well assuming its not Ghostwrit, it was a cool punch with a good nameplay and had good wording to it. A BIG improvement from the first bar.

Anyways, although I liked Caustics second bar, I hated his first one as to where The original had a more consistant and creative verse that hit harder and had better wording.

V/The Original.
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Old 02-12-09, 09:41 AM   #8
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It's nothing new, perfectly describes you, a new style'll leave you hurting
seriously if your the Original-- there's clearly a demand for an updated version
I like this, havn't saw it before so its not played to me........so dope punch but wording is a little off


dude seriously, can you even drop a punch that's not horrible
like how you gonna flip The Original with the most played ass punch possible
no wonder you never get pussy, i'll smack you coz I hurt gays
n' the only time you see 'tic in a box, is when he's filling out gay rights surveys
1st was gay, like I said wasn't played to me.....2nd was fire wordplay was dope, I dont know what people talk about it, concepts never get old jut the way they are puttogether is, so if you can call someone gay in a creative way like that, its sick not played.


So what you think my shit played, I are who I is don't get it misunderstood
If I didn't drop Original... Its cause I actually planned on dropping good
wasn't feeling it, was ok put wording was off, and I dont believe you had a ghostwriter for that, thats a retarded claim... this dude a moron^ and "are who I is" what are you trying to be as illiterate as timberland, lol


it was actually pretty close if you ask me, one dope punch each, but the gay bar did make me laugh and I think i hit a little harder, the the original name play a biut more creative


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Old 02-12-09, 10:24 AM   #9
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It's nothing new, perfectly describes you, a new style'll leave you hurting
seriously if your the Original-- there's clearly a demand for an updated version
Poorly worded, forced. Overall not really harsh


dude seriously, can you even drop a punch that's not horrible
like how you gonna flip The Original with the most played ass punch possible
^eh not really feelin this. didn't rhyme that great. kind of just blah

no wonder you never get pussy, i'll smack you coz I hurt gays
n' the only time you see 'tic in a box, is when he's filling out gay rights survey
Wording could have been better, concept wasn't bad though.


So what you think my shit played, I are who I is don't get it misunderstood
If I didn't drop Original... Its cause I actually planned on dropping good
I know you didnt ghostwrite this. This is the 3rd week in a row, you've dropped a nice nameplay and overall a descent punch. I thought this was a clever punch, a bit played. But nicely worded. Effective.


overall this was damn close. 1 against 1. in my opinion i just felt like caus's came off harder. Both of you guy's first bars were weak as fuck. But 2nd bar from caus was a bit stronger. better worded.
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Old 02-12-09, 11:31 AM   #10
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I give up. Caustic wins.
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Old 02-12-09, 08:28 PM   #11
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LMAO @ having a ghostwriter your kidding right? I dropped the first one fast as he requested so he could drop then took a few days to think about the response. but anyway...
G.O.A.T it is now?
 
Old 02-12-09, 10:22 PM   #12
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Dont lyao @ ghostwriter, your style switched drastically in every way. Its a possibility
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Old 02-12-09, 11:15 PM   #13
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LMAO @ having a ghostwriter your kidding right? I dropped the first one fast as he requested so he could drop then took a few days to think about the response. but anyway...
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Old 02-12-09, 11:58 PM   #14
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well i cant see GOATS verse and apparently he gives up sooo v/caustic
 
Old 02-13-09, 09:56 AM   #15
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^he actually probably would have won. had he not erased his punches.
*Edits them back in*
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