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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

rofl @ you still keeping me in this...whatever, i'll write some shitty verus

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im here sir....................

Defeat this chump easy, cam i'll leave ya head caved in...
coz ur wackness is horrifying you must be Wes Craven
Dont Speak or front, advice isnt free you cunt im being blunt
in saying try to contruct 1 decent punch
That doest use up a whole week from your month!!
Watch and learn as I box this nerd off my turf
leave this "penis limp" not because he's got no sperm
He must work in a gym because he's definatley the kind
To workout busta the way that he's stretching rhymes...
Invest in some time because I know your pretty worthless
well at least you admit, referring to your own "shitty verses"
Leave this guy shafted, coz he likes guys and has had cocks
They got the combination to his ass like its his personal padlock!!
Internet forums maybe nerdy so it's quite clear your a geek
because online battling.....
is enough to keep this coke dealer off of the streets!!...

i didnt bother doing 16 cz i think this guys a no show...........

lol, well your right, i was gonna no show, but seeing as how you dropped i'll write something up quick

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I'm a mario, n i'm growing in size, he aint got a clue
Cuz i'm higher than fuck the way i'm eating this lil murshroom
Watch the votes pour in, i aint gotta clame to be doper
Spitting graceful like a diplomat, when i say Cam's career's over
Flip em like skate decks, ya shits old concepts and garbage text
Even ya know's perfectly stating the truth that Cam's A rec
Nerdy n white, watch what this gay guy really means to say
'Jared gave me a 5 dollar footlong', but he aint talkin Subway

oh well

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fuck

know's is suppose to be name

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cool lets get some votes,lol at ur mario line thats funny as fuck

lol

thanks man


vote up!!

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Defeat this chump easy, cam i'll leave ya head caved in...
coz ur wackness is horrifying you must be Wes Craven
(Nah)
Dont Speak or front, advice isnt free you cunt im being blunt
in saying try to contruct 1 decent punch
That doest use up a whole week from your month!!
(Eh, not really.)
Watch and learn as I box this nerd off my turf
leave this "penis limp" not because he's got no sperm
(Nah dude.)
He must work in a gym because he's definatley the kind
To workout busta the way that he's stretching rhymes...
(Forced.)
Invest in some time because I know your pretty worthless
well at least you admit, referring to your own "shitty verses"
(Nah not feelin this either.)
Leave this guy shafted, coz he likes guys and has had cocks
They got the combination to his ass like its his personal padlock!!
(Needed some rewording. To simple)
Internet forums maybe nerdy so it's quite clear your a geek
because online battling.....
is enough to keep this coke dealer off of the streets!!...
(OK.)


Your concepts arn't that bad, but your wording isn't that great and your delivery is weak, thus the punch doesn't hit very hard.

vs

I'm a mario, n i'm growing in size, he aint got a clue
Cuz i'm higher than fuck the way i'm eating this lil murshroom
(Could've been cooler with better wording.)
Watch the votes pour in, i aint gotta clame to be doper
Spitting graceful like a diplomat, when i say Cam's career's over
(Nah.)
Flip em like skate decks, ya shits old concepts and garbage text
Even ya know's perfectly stating the truth that Cam's A rec
(Nah.)
Nerdy n white, watch what this gay guy really means to say
'Jared gave me a 5 dollar footlong', but he aint talkin Subway
(Weak.)



Well, basically.. the best bar I saw in this whole thing was from Coke Dealer in his first punch, but even that was the greatest.

Of course, on the other hand, you only dropped 8 lines and ur opponent 14 but thats cool too.

No hate.

Vote - Coke Dealer

yer clearly he won the battle with 1 line but its cool

Cam - i heard alot of good things about you that you were supposed to be real ill but this verse disappointed as fuck homie.

Internet forums maybe nerdy so it's quite clear your a geek
because online battling.....
is enough to keep this coke dealer off of the streets!!...

only thing worth quoting n i was leaning towards not even quoting it in away.


Coke dealer-



I'm a mario, n i'm growing in size, he aint got a clue
Cuz i'm higher than fuck the way i'm eating this lil murshroom

only thing really worth quoting outta your verse also. disappointing battle from 'the b class' in this tourny.

Im gonna give it to coke dealer because his shit had more potential n cams shit was real choppy at points n could use alot of rewording.

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btw just to clarify im not camarac...he didnt wanna take part in the comp so he let me use his account to do so he explained it in ma last battle n yer hes a real dope battler i have a long way to go lol