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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

smh, you again?

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no shit. Check check though good luck.

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You know what they say about under dawgs is they come out on top
Mega don't type raw when this little bitch barely drops
42 post and you think you go so incredibly hard
When each week ya bars sound the same like lil wayne ghosts writes in your heart
Febuary 2009 must of been the birthday of the ungreatfull
Even if you was civil you would fight within ya self like your hatefull
Im tired of ya rhyme schemes and how bad you are at this
Its like you don't text with fingers and ya text with ya fist (. ,., mjmjkkkkkkkjkjlklj)
Wit ya pussy lips kissin the keys like its ya last kiss
Because from my keyboard i make yours get into this
You supposed to be the one with the most expectations
Civil thinks he see something in you all i see is another rap soul im taken
You a bitch wit no style and talk about how niggas is gay or about guns
Give me one true personal or good metaphor and i'll admit you got the punch
But you don't you little punk Your style is a generic brand
Its like you is something that can stand but i'll blow you like the future afganastan
Mega types raw because you neva got cred on the stage
They booed you worse then eminem on 8 mile when his mind went blank
So you betta stop the choke wit every catagory 0 and 0
I'll protect myself from you because i don't want a win category of zero/

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The B.E.S.T Crew
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Mega vs You? No need to warn me Civils handing out money to boast n ill tourney,
While this pussys so scared he’s handing out money to protect himself from me.


.vs


nothing.


mega once again you showed alot of potential. Your concepts are definately original, we can all see that. you just got to work on re wording them effectively. Fly, dude i dont know what to tell you dog. EVERY single one of your bars was a statement. You didnt have anything that connected. You got to make it into a punch man, you cant just say shit about your opponent...and think thats gon get you a win. You got to make punches man...direct personals....work on wordplay.


v/mega

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

I beat him once already so you’re my bitch now watch as I stun on her,
It’s simple Fly-E is under Dog like he’s working for the Hawaiian Bounty Hunter.
this could have been fire, but worded bad



nothing big from fly-e yourg etting better dude stay at it you'll get it


vote mega

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It's ok to make money, Legit or illegal...
But it's treason when you turn your back on your people.

He gets on stage, spits and the crowd is silent as a praying monk lemme offer some help,
N force feed him sweets, chocolate chips, a bunch of junk so you can be full of yourself.
I’ll already beat you homie and you couldn’t be fly with a pack of sea gulls,
So I’ll just cross you twice on my hit list that’s the closest you’d get to equal.

vs.

Nothing

Vote - Megatypezraw

I beat him once already so you’re my bitch now watch as I stun on her,
It’s simple Fly-E is under Dog like he’s working for the Hawaiian Bounty Hunter.

descent opener

He gets on stage, spits and the crowd is silent as a praying monk lemme offer some help,
N force feed him sweets, chocolate chips, a bunch of junk so you can be full of yourself.

Descent hit

When the bullet goes down your throught I bet it will hardly sting,
I’ll do you a favor n ‘cock’ the nine in ur mouth so u can die reminiscing of ur favorite thing.

descent

I’ll already beat you homie and you couldn’t be fly with a pack of sea gulls,
So I’ll just cross you twice on my hit list that’s the closest you’d get to equal.

barely descent

Mega vs You? No need to warn me Civils handing out money to boast n ill tourney,
While this pussys so scared he’s handing out money to protect himself from me.

barely descent

N I’m fuckin ballin rollen in a Lexus, I see a chick I want n trust me I catch her,
Fly-E moven on females? Yah if a chick nurse puts this feigns ass on the stretcher.

barely descent

It’s a shame to see such a broke man walkin it must but the liquor talking,
but if you see him beggin for change he’s not backin up Obamas campaign slogan.


barely ryhmed..descent though

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You know what they say about under dawgs is they come out on top
Mega don't type raw when this little bitch barely drops

Nice opener / nameflip

42 post and you think you go so incredibly hard
When each week ya bars sound the same like lil wayne ghosts writes in your heart

descent

Febuary 2009 must of been the birthday of the ungreatfull
Even if you was civil you would fight within ya self like your hatefull

barely descent

Im tired of ya rhyme schemes and how bad you are at this
Its like you don't text with fingers and ya text with ya fist (. ,., mjmjkkkkkkkjkjlklj)

barely descent

Wit ya pussy lips kissin the keys like its ya last kiss
Because from my keyboard i make yours get into this

barely descnet

You supposed to be the one with the most expectations
Civil thinks he see something in you all i see is another rap soul im taken

barely descent

You a bitch wit no style and talk about how niggas is gay or about guns
Give me one true personal or good metaphor and i'll admit you got the punch

descent

But you don't you little punk Your style is a generic brand
Its like you is something that can stand but i'll blow you like the future afganastan

Descent

Mega types raw because you neva got cred on the stage
They booed you worse then eminem on 8 mile when his mind went blank

barely descent / barely rhymed

So you betta stop the choke wit every catagory 0 and 0
I'll protect myself from you because i don't want a win category of zero/

descent closer



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Vote - Fly-E

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Thanks for the votes for both of us appreciate ya'll time goood lookx

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Mega your flow was decent could of use multis to help it flow smother your punches was on and off at time ur creativeness was ok and ur verse was pretty decent 7/10
Fly e. Ur flow also could of used multis to help the flow be smother but also could of use better wording , ur punches was more off then on to me and that's also due to lack of creativity even thou mega was weak to but better then urs you could of use harder punches and u would of won....
6/10

Vote mega

He gets on stage, spits and the crowd is silent as a praying monk lemme offer some help
N force feed him sweets, chocolate chips, a bunch of junk so you can be full of yourself
Mega vs You? No need to warn me Civils handing out money to boast n ill tourney,
While this pussys so scared he’s handing out money to protect himself from me.
It’s a shame to see such a broke man walkin it must but the liquor talking,
but if you see him beggin for change he’s not backin up Obamas campaign slogan.


vs.

nothing.

Mega your verse wasn't too good dude, but it wasn't because you lacked concepts, you have a fresh mind and you can think up concepts which is good, but now you have to work on wording them into harder hitting punches. Look at the punches I thought were good and try and make all of yours like that, and work on your rhymescheme too and take more time on your verse, i can tell this was done really fast.

Fly E you need to quit stretching your punches so long like that, it makes the verse look ugly. Also work on your rhyme scheme, keep it up though man you'll be elevating in no time.

v/Mega

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