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Old 04-17-03, 02:24 PM   #1
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Jus Sum Otha Shyt

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AYO'TASTE THE NEW NEKTA/
AS I SPIT RAW TEXTURE/
BLAZE YUR SEKTOR/
IT MIGHT VEX YA'/
BUT WHEN I TEST YA'/
HAVE YU LAYED OUT ONNA STRETCHA/
HOT AND STEAMIN /
LIKE WILLIE BEAMON/
ME HANDIN OVER THE MIC IS LIKE LYRIKAL TREASON/
PUNISHABLE BY DEATH AND BLEEDIN/
AND I REFUSE TO BE EATIN/
SO I PICK UP THE MIC AND DEKLARE AN OPEN SEASON/
ON ALL THE OPPOSTION/
HATIN FOR LAK OF VISION/
KREATIN AND KAUSIN FRIKTION/
I BLAZE YUR BOMB MISSION/
REVERSE YA' HATA INTENTIONS/
AND LEAVE YU IN INKREDIBLE DISPOSITION/
I RIP MICS/
WHEN I SPIT NISE/
FLIP DISE/
BREAK YUR POCKETS AND SNATCH YUR ICE/
AND IT GOES JUS LIKE DAT/
GET DOE HIT HOES AND SPIT FLOWS TIL MY LUNGZ KOLLAPSE/
ME AND MY NIGGAZ DO DRIVE BY'S WIT OUT STRAPS/
JUS SNATCH YU UP SWING YU AROUND AND BREAK YUR BACK/
WE DA' INVINSABLE ENTERA'GE/
IN INVISABLE CAMOFLAGE/
HIDIN IN THA BUSHES READY TO SET IT OFF/
SO WHO WANT IT WIT US/
WE KWICK TO BUS'/
LIKE PRE-MATURE EJAKULATION WHEN YU NUT/
OPPOSITIONAL VIKTORY IS IMPOSSIBLE/
VERB SKILLZ PHENOMINOL/
WATCH HOW I SPIT AT YU DESTROYS YUR OPTIKALS/
I AM THE UNTOPPABLE/
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Old 04-17-03, 02:25 PM   #2
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I couldn't feel this one really sorry. OoNnEe
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Old 04-17-03, 02:30 PM   #3
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first off, take off the all caps....its just really hard to read. second you need to make your bars longer. but for the lyrics they weren't to bad. had a good vocab. keep spittin...

and could you peep out my shit?http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39624
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Old 04-17-03, 02:38 PM   #4
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IT'S ALL GOOD THANX
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