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3-0 is KO
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I'm 'kickin' vicious shit so speak & you'll be shittin Timbs for weeks/
ya rhymes could use some definition so here's a list of synonyms for"weak"/
Timid, slim, & beat; pathetic, ass, scrawny, tired, & hopeless/
ya mic's wires are frozen cuz ya lyrics is 'short on fire' like roaches/
be careful cuz death approaches, ya left lying in a hurse/
Leaving this Earth 'toe tagged' like playin hide n seek with a smerf/
Now the beast has emerged, teachin this herb to plot the blue print/
U must be a 'square', u and the winners circle are not congruent/
heres my 2 cents, you must be willing to die with your mind cluttered/
Work on text design fucker then develop some rhyme structure/
I leave spines ruptured, show you how i attack tracks and score fast/
call me a weatherman when i put your norm ass into four casts/
now that i've smoked more hash, i'm ready to rip kids into six bits/
you could drop your dim spits at a circus, and still couldn't come
in-tense(tents)/
i spin tricks with scorn and anger, while you leave'em suspense-less/
Blunt = "i see whack people!" i guess i got that sixth sense....//

Where you at!

I'm here now.. I was just leaving work when I set this battle up.. give me a minute

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T_pound.. just one, son that ain't weight.//
I come with entire shipments, choppin' this herb'll be like christmas time sellin' candy canes.//
you got a wittless rhyme and still try'n ta celebrate.//
how you proud of that shit anyways, it's worse than a geo storm, you'll never accelerate.//
just a de-generate freak of nature, nothin' you write'll ever save ya.//
I'm at the top of the evolutionary ladder, you on the bottom rung gettin' ya head rung.//
off the next step up, an' if you manage to get a next step up I'm-a back off.//
never said I was gonna slack off.. 'cause what you don't know is I'm settin' a trap dawg.//
draw you closer and closer then laugh as tha bar snaps on this rat and splats blood.//
I can tell that verse was a drastic attempt ta win son, but you still commin' in last.. what?.//
I'm just tellin' it like it is, and you know it, so just hoplessly composing these bars.//
and toytally destroyin' ya last scrap-a * regard.//
you'll never "loose yourself" in the music, 'cause to do that you gotta go far.//
and you've reached the end of the line with this battle, you fallin' hard.//
dawg should be in lock up, 'cause he's too 'samll' to ever be 'at large'.//

^ bold line was edited to take the word your out where the * is

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both of ya'll came correct, but I gotta give it to T-pound, his shit was just tighter . . .

"be careful cuz death approaches, ya left lying in a hurse/
Leaving this Earth 'toe tagged' like playin hide n seek with a smerf/
Now the beast has emerged, teachin this herb to plot the blue print/
U must be a 'square', u and the winners circle are not congruent/"

that shit was tight . . . VOTE=T_pound

hey, check out my battle with Conspiracy . . . thanks

1-0 fot T.. uppin 4 more..

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I'm 'kickin' vicious shit so speak & you'll be shittin Timbs for weeks/
ya rhymes could use some definition so here's a list of synonyms for"weak"/
Timid, slim, & beat; pathetic, ass, scrawny, tired, & hopeless/
ya mic's wires are frozen cuz ya lyrics is 'short on fire' like roaches/

^^haha NICE.

Blunt = "i see whack people!" i guess i got that sixth sense....//

^^haha, funny, ok punch.

you'll never "loose yourself" in the music, 'cause to do that you gotta go far.//


^^pretty nice.

Good battle y'all.


MY VOTE GOES TO::: t pound. u started off strong then kinda fell off. Blunt u gotta work on metas and wordplay. i noticed u had some concepts but the way u word ur punch is crucial to deciding how hard it gonna hhit. good luck y;all keep elevating. thanks for voting BLunt-MC. i appreciate it. T-Pound go vote on my battle vs. BribeOne1 please. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=39493

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The Soul Purpose LP . . . Summer '04

yo, uppin 4 votes 2-0.. damn y'all...

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Uppin

please be kind... rewind.. lol.. nah, just vote on this shit you fuckin' sleepers...

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yo shouldn't this be on the elite lines? both have 6 battle wins on da record...

Hey man "You Jus got Knocked tha fuck out"-smokey
Nah good battle dawg
-peaceout-

so shouldn't it be on the otha one or not?