its been a minute since i dropped so here's another cut

its too em's love me beat......first half is written second half is freestyled....gimme some pointers n feedback

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/o...ellectmusic.htm


IMA GET AT SOME THREADS SOON SO DONT SLEEP

zzzzzzzz

FUCKIT

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HOOK ME UP MAN, SHIT

LUV IT OR HATE IT I DONT CARE JUST----- IT u know

pretty good that shit was too bad

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The flow is good delivery good emotion good... the end of it be4 u started saying AK AK i like the best rhyme wise... didnt seem to have n e hard punches or n e thing like that in there tho but good track

*listenin*

deliverys solid
quality is good
ridin the beat nicely
hook is simple but catchy
2nd verse was loosin quality guess it was only cuz you was fadin it out, but none the less, it was a tight drop mos def.

feelin it.
one

thnx alot.....apreciate the feedbak

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ITS MY BIRTHDAY U FUCKIN COCKS



u
should all


SUCK A DICK N TWO BALLS

cause im 20 gottdammnitet

haha ^^Happy Birthday^^ ...You gotta get some feedback on ya birthday haha...Nice beat...You on track nice, good flow, good presentation and delivery...Some pretty good lines..All round its pretty good stuff dogg, Keep it up, Peace!!!!

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THANX MIIIIEEENN


GO DAVID ITS YA BIRTHDAY (alicia keys)

shut up biatch n play that damn piano!