10- 15 lines....deadlin, 30 mins...

I seen yo movies, HellRaizor/
And jus like they were knocked off da charts, ima knock u off this rap shit wit a tazor/
My gaze'll burn thru ya chest like a lazor/
Wings'll flap and my talons will snap/
My sqwak will sound and my beak will tap/
Yo lil bitch ass 6 feet unda/
Cause when my shit spooks ya like thunda/
Words dont jus stop there they cut thru ya like lightenin/
Cause we all know u aint no bad boy, everyone elses shit is jus to frightening/
So now that im done rippin you, and makin you eat all the shit i spew/
Ima take you outback and add yo dead ass to the rabbit stew/

aight that was a nice post hope mine isnt to weak

you might as well grab a bag a popcorn and watch me do my thing, you should really get a life cause you still tryin to flow at nineteen//and the ten lines you posted aint nothin to me cause my raps will make you cry on bended knee//with 20 posts what did you expect? cause ya rhymes is slackin like 65 yr. old war vets//i dont even consider this real rap battle i consider this me rippin hands off and makin em clap for you//you comin at me all wrong, probably thought i was weak but after im done you bout to start your losing streak//and its no tellin what im bout to do,cause my rhymes are cuttin yours like the rocks barney rubble and em used//but after this is over its all gravy, cause i can tell my rhymes got you shakin like crack babies//

-1- good luck

vote hell.....he got alot more personal and his punches hit harder

return the favor and vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=46208

I went the other way...
Raven's shit was real good and also easy to read.
It flowed well for me.
I likes da flow, mang!

Raven

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aight my vote goes to hellraizor cause he flowed tighter and had some good punches so my vote=hellraizor..................hit up my battle and dont forget to poll aight one holla back.....

born to kill you just lost to mysterious so im not trippin off you its whatever hateful votes dont matter to me either way someones gonna win

yo hell im tryin to poll on this battle for u and its says i need an explanition but i have this shit had been doing this to me since i was able to poll do u know whats wrong.......aight one holla back

i appreciate it mysterious keep tryin for me champ system is whacko out this joint i swear need to go back to the way it was -1-

aight ill keep tryin and keep askin peepz if they know whats wrong so i could finally vote for all of ya thats helped me out by pollin so good look on that ..................aight one

BOTH FLOWS WERE TIGHT BUT THIS ONE GOES TO HELL BECAUSE HE HAD BETTER FLOW AND HARDER PUNCHES BUT RavenofKorpse
GO CHECK IN AT OUR BATTLE MC KILLA-T VS. YOU

VOTE: HELLRAZOR

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hellraizor had better punches. he came harder in this battle.
vote=hell
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yo hell killed that hit im voting fo hell can yall do me a favor
and vote on my battle vs lyrico

good battle yall keep up the good work

my vote goes ta hellraizer. punches were better and he had more personals.
vote=hellraizer
reurn tha favor and vote for my against Nh and my battles against Nolia Boy

I would vote for Razah if I could but I cant he got a lil bit more work under his belt and it showed in this battle but they were both good