Sup G's, its ma girls birthday tomorra, i wrote this straight off for her, its real personal and ma feelings, its simple n me fosure.....

Helen, i love you, dont ever forget it, i wont make you regret it....


i no how whack this sounds//
we came from differant back grounds//
you had your life all comfortable n stable//
had your direction and beliefs, always strivin to be who you wanna be//
me i was a dead beat, i sometimes struggled to eat//
i would fleat here and their, taken what wasent mine//
didnt care who i trampled on, aslong as i lived long//
theirs the fundamental differance//
u are all sweet and honest, never took nothin or hurt anyone//
where i was angry and depressed, sometimes couldent be botherd to get dressed//
always forgot about the rest, life was one big test//
i tried to stay true and believe and hope n prey//
but all i was looking for was to stray, find ma next prey//
**chorus**
I done some shitty things in ma life//
but now i wanna make you ma wife, for life//
i no we struggle but it always ends in a huggle//
life never tasted so sweet or felt so good//
i promice i wanna be with you for good//

i never forget the day i met you, i musta looked like a fool//
stupid whigga tryin to play it kool, proberly looked re un kool//
see from the moment i met ya, i new i needed ya//
i felt your warm arua, seen ur glow, i new i was proberly too low//
i remember your 1st words, "I dont always look like this"/
in truth i couldent give a shit, all i whanted was a kiss//
i hope your feelin this//
**chorus**
I done some shitty things in ma life//
but now i wanna make you ma wife, for life//
i no we struggle but it always ends in a huggle//
life never tasted so sweet or felt so good//
i promice i wanna be with you for good//

I remember when we stayed up late, always talkin about what we hate//
when always in ma mind i needed you, ma heart was yearning for you//
when u where at work, ma mind was burnin wid loss, u r the boss, of my heart//
when we used to part, u took ma heart with you//
u see being with out you for just 1 second hurt me bad, i used to get all mad//
i no it was ma bad, it makes me a sad fool//
but i couldent help it when i looked at you, my defences dropped//
faster then fences in gailforce winds, u blew me over//
**chorus**
I done some shitty things in ma life//
but now i wanna make you ma wife, for life//
i no we struggle but it always ends in a huggle//
life never tasted so sweet or felt so good//
i promice i wanna be with you for good//

then we finally got together, felt as good a mid summers day weather//
took u out for a meal, we made our deal, do you remember? it was last september//
I was so scared and confused, didnt whant ma heart to be abused or used//
i knew you where differant, but i couldent trust you//
i had never trusted or loved nobody, now ma heart was crying out for that feeling//
it was like a hunger burnin in side out, u cant imagine how i felt//
so i pushed you away, said some terrible things, didnt mean 1 of um no way//
then i thought i lossed you, couldent bring maself to live, only drink//
i was on the brink, of a cliff, didnt care if a fell or didnt//
i only new i needed you, then we got together again, made me become all sain//
now we livin together n everyday is like perfect whether//
leave u never will i, i'd rather fall n die//
i no im a wanker to live with, and u say im jealos n untrustin//
i do trust you, im just scared, ma feelin's cant be compared//
but i got you now, ring's in da post//
girl your the one i love the most//

you are appreciated........xxxxx

Yo Shit Was Hott No Doubt, I Feeling This Just Reading Son, I Like To RB audio's Like This Once In a Blue Moon nah mean...But Yeah, Hit Me Up Niggah....Let's Kick Something Already For This Niggahs Out Herr'....

Holla At Ya Boi...

that was really heartfelt.....i liked it alot.....nice piece man

keep spittin

thanks for the feed back..

where i was angry and depressed, sometimes couldent be botherd to get dressed//the word play in some places was ill

that was deep deep deep

thanks dawg much respect, i appreciate yall taken ya time out to cheak ma rhyme out....

uppin

uppin..

I WAS FEELING IT FAM PEEP MY 2 DROPS OUT GIVE ME SOME REAL CRITIQUING

uppin

YEAH THIS WAS DEFINITELY TIGHT MAN, YOU HAD A LOT TO SAY BABAYBOY BUT ITS ALL GOOD...ITS HOT..ONE

uppin dis for yall cats

well tha emotion in this was deep much respect for that,but "huggle" come on kid that just ruined tha chorus for me now this is if were speakin on mainly lyricist terms, but for ya girl its ill deeply felt in that area. still give u props though, keep elevatin. stay up playa

man ima say it 1 more time,,, dis shit was for ma girl,,, i had to write in english so she could read it n feel it na mean... n fuck yea we huggle n snuggle she's ma girl i luv her,,, i aint shamed by shit man,,,,,, i said at the start this aint anythin but simple for ma girl....elavatin u for real,,,, dis shit was wordplay...... nough said