This some key i had to do for an audio semi final topic thingamybob loL!
Heres Half of it...

Prologue

Streets Are Where Lives Are Decided-And-Compromised/
Arguments And Familys Divided-for the-last cry/
One Last Time I Stumble through the shop to spend my last-dime/
aint right again so i make the most of my vast-time/

Pick Up a cardboard box and countless items fly-in/
Docters Say i got 3 months left at the most cos im die-ing/
I Crawl Outta the shop and trip up the pavement, ive lost-myself/
im like smoking " it affects your health"/
£4.50 a Pack and only 10 inside, i wonder what this life-really-provides/
Certainly not security or a safe family home, i place a knive-by-my-side/

Add On From Prologue

Im concealed from what and where reality-exists/
Im Concealed from where the real life-twists/

With Success Comes Greed and alot-of-burdens/
You Scream from the inside and wonder if anyone-heard-them/
Success and Trust dont come easy so you gotta explain-why-you-need/
When Life goes to the knife edge, try to refrain-from-sudden-bleeds/
Dont Hurt yourself more than your hurting-inside/
Try to Explain to her whats wrong and with-her-confide/
The Rain hits the concrete and creates an image that doesnt-matter-ta-me/
bruised face and dis-shaped nose, this shits reality-fa-me/
Donno how to express or legally change-my-feelings/
i gotta resurface my life like painting-the-ceiling/
The WhiteWalls Washed explaining my life as a blank-portrayal/
You could say i been thru alot of shit, my friends aint there for me, tank-of-betrayal/

notbad...

i can see that in some lines ya multis are flowing nice..
but at times its a bit choppy, but overall this was an ill drop..

Props..

Keep spitting..

peace
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Nice lyrics, work on the flow a little, but nice combos and story. peep: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55464

this was a nice drop. had some good multies, nice lyrics and for a good vocab. nice shit man. could you peep mine out?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=55645

thanks