my mind runs a one track course.//
guns an' drug sacks first,//
next comes sex an' once I'm done that tha chorus.//
but before this it's torment for dem dick-ryda's an' whore-men.//
corner surfers suffer thru muster gas dusters.//
plus this lust for words got me stuck on verbs.//
add-lib automatic pro-nouns leavin' competition pronounced dead on arrival.//
all my rivals sent to a point beyond revival,//
commin' on stage wearin' so many colours like I'm try'n-a be tribal.//
I'm tha kind that'll bribe a preecher while he's readin' ta bible.//
call me evils desciple, illegal insida trading an' launderin' so much money you could call me Mc-Maid.//
a made man with more damaged brain stems than sedam husain has.//
plus I roll with tha same clan in the eyes of the same man, president bush.//
the united nations resident "tush", ASS, terrorize him an' a generation back..// (hi dad)
I laugh when I heard about coloumbine high shot up by them guys that no-one liked.//
like they was pushed to the point of max tention, if I was their teacher I wouldn't even suspend-um.//
I'd hand-um a comendation an' announce a celebration thru-out the entire nation.//
split personalities, I'm a one man collaboration.//
exageratin' on callibraton, put a 45 down your throat, that should appease your oral fixation.//
while I'm watchin' strip tease jackin' off in my grandparents basement.//
loosin' patience as my head grows weightless from my wrists laceration.//
pass tha bacon, I ain't want beef, but I will have some cheese with my wine.//
please, it's just fine, my memory's almost dry, gotta squeeze out my rhymes.//
I breath out an' die, from these ammounts of lines I tried.//
like 9 g's I'm high, geeez, makes me wonder why I'd ever buy weed.//


TOTAL KEYSTYLE.... let me know what u think 'bout it

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uuuummm...this was hot shit...i'll expand a little, the flow stayed on point most of the time went a little choppy at times...probably jus the way i was reading itBLAH, vocab was there, wordplay was very ceative...for a freestyle, nice multi's. liked reading it.

if ya got time hit up a battle of mine in front lines cuz there getting slept on.

~1~

uppin'

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yo son this shit was hot like the whole scheme and everything

YO BLUNT YOU'RE SICK MAN, WHERE DID SOME OF THE STUFF YOU SAY COME FROM. ANYWAY, THE RHYME STYLE WAS HOT KID. THIS DON'T LOOK LIKE A NARROW MIND TO ME MAN. UPPPPIINNN FAM. LET'S GET THE CROWN! DOPE DROP!

shit was tight man

Pretty Much Summed It All Up

add-lib automatic pro-nouns leavin' competition pronounced dead on arrival.//
all my rivals sent to a point beyond revival,//


pretty hot shit right here..nice drop

does every1 in bre dr there better opponents or does it just seem that way??? any blunt dope drop man good flo and vocab