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06-22-03, 06:39 PM | #1 | |||||||
Tickle My Sloth
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Caught In The Rain
IP: ABE5 FC72
My lifes this Inked Expression . . it helps me to Sink Depression
She took my Heart into Account and got left w/a Bad Investment This pad progression means nothing without you there for support I stare at you and tears form, caught in the reign of the years gone. Pain swarmed my every thought . . I became warped and obsessed Wishing too lock horns with the lost forms of the loving depressed. The newly wed ‘Romeo and Juliet’ did no longer exist. Behind closed doors i’d act out Punch and Judy shows with my fists. The kids would run upstairs and hide, thinking they mom’d be alright But that night left nothing but a grim sight and a trail of sick lies. . The knife was my accomplice, weapon of choice left to my own devices Stabbed twice, Leeann’s corpse lay in front of me, body cold and lifeless Thinking “Why this?” Is murder the sum of the brutal man ive become? Buried her among some weeds and shrubs beneath the trees and stumps. Knee deep in blood . . but this wasn’t my fault . . . if only she’d listened The end of her nervous system, the last words of my victim will haunt me in prison. No trace of leeann, no DNA and theres no eye witness No motive, no weapon Nothing left but lies and statistics, I stayed with her after id killed her, sat next to her and I cried She was the best thing in my life, but it took me her death to realise. |
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06-23-03, 12:37 AM | #2 | |||||||
BANNED for biting
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IP: A086 F184
This was Nice dawg.... U had a Nice concept too it , Deep piece man.... Keep Spitting
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06-23-03, 12:50 AM | #3 | |||||||
Special Ghost To Blow
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IP: 4577 CD9A
not bad at all...the eminem concept except branched out a lil..
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06-23-03, 03:33 AM | #4 | |||||||
Tickle My Sloth
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IP: EFD4 DF04
^ Not really, its for the topical league at H2F, lol. .
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06-23-03, 03:41 AM | #5 | |||||||
Rhyme Ripper
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IP: 138A 47F5
nice shizz there homie,
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06-23-03, 04:35 PM | #6 | |||||||
Tickle My Sloth
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IP: C076 548E
Yeah, thanks for the indepth replies, lol. .
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06-23-03, 04:59 PM | #7 | |||||||
Rhyme Ripper
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IP: F0BF 2D94
lol anytime dawg, aye cam remeber the dark intent crew? lmao
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06-23-03, 05:37 PM | #8 | |||||||
Tickle My Sloth
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IP: C076 548E
^ Yup, i started it, lol.
my alias here is Vortex by the way, incase you didnt know. . |
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