lol, sorry had to get ur attention

i keyed this up as a tryout, its done off Eazy muthafuckin E's 24 hours to Live in mind...

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Duece Four hours to Live


Swing low, sweet chariot.... Comin forth to carry
me hoooome [carry me home]
Swing low, sweet chariot.... Comin forth to carry
me hoooome [carry me home]


The doc dropped bad news with a pop of his pen
my blocks stopped thinkin, brain matter too thin
24 hours to live, 1 day then thats the end
i sit down, and i keep tryna get my head str8 again
so many things i wanted to do, and wanted to see
the places i wanted to go, things i wanted to acheive

Comin forth to carry me hoooome [carry me home]

22 left, im just not sure what i should do
i geuss gettin dressed is first n get out this hospital
19 left, i max and relax with my boys like i used to
with 15 left the bigest problem of all rols thru
"lil man, daddys not gunna be home tommorow,
no not the next day, or after that though"

Comin forth to carry me hoooome [carry me home]

12 hours, now im gettin scared, half my time is lost
11 now, i realize i actually wasted my whole life off
10, shit, fuck it, im ready to go, no worrys
matter of fact, deaths a bitch, i hope ur in a hurry
6 left, i think i got myself a good plan
ima go find that doctor and kill the man
2 hours, im at the office, i waltz right on in
wait for an hour with a gat in hand, a standoff begins
30 minutes left

riiiiing riiiiiiiing "hello?"

"hello, miss P4k?"

"yes"

"it seems your sons records were switched, weve made
a mistake, your son is in good health"

"but he said he feels sick"

"hypocrondriatic reflexes, he thinks hes dying, but
hes not"

*click*


comin forth to carry me hoooome [carry me home]


30 seconds left and now im ready to make my way off
doc got popped, and now i end my life with a

*gunshot*


Swing low, sweet chariot.... Comin forth to carry
me hoooome [carry me home]
Swing low, sweet chariot.... Comin forth to carry
me hoooome [carry me home]

haha nice man nice
i liked it
keep er up

This Was Pretty Tight I Liked It..Title Was Hot As Hell..LoL

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This is a dope sig.

lol uppin to the top

not bad yo.. I liked the concept... too bad he didn't die, life in prison would be the same

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yea,,,,,,

goin superman

this was mad hot, i liked the whole concept, everythin was good

please peep my new piece-The Lonesome(need a friend)

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