Chorus:
Only God can judge me now is what Pac' said,
so much violent talk instead of silent walks that's why people are shot dead.
Everyone's a critic to another man's art,
I remember good hip hop the mid-eighties with jams in the park.
Haters today with negativity like females and chicks so moody,
but only God can be my judge until then I let you fags play Judge Judy. (2x)

Verse:
Crews against crews but we still only on the net,
ya'll hating me when we still have'nt made it out the burbs and projects yet.
Be cool money ya still working at McDonald's and on your demo,
but got the nerve to talk to me like you dropped 5 hits and got a dropped benzo.
Wishing you were in the club with big name record execs. to build and mingle,
criticizing my picture like you made 3 albums and about to make ya next single,
like you've been in the game for a minute prince status and you already trying to elevate to a symbol.
You cats kill me on here with the replies ya drop,
I guess the trend now is to hate to rise to the top,
the more ya'll study BET and MTV the more ya'll write the lies ya watch.
Bottom man say word^ to the man above so I'm gonna keep writing and serve the man above,
one day the lyrical pictures I paint will demand ya hugs some words just deserve the love.
Used to write in caps so I calmed it down when everybody told me to stop,
the way this culture push you away sometimes it makes me wanna run the alternative route and jump into pop.
Britney and O-Town won't mind if I had a simple swagger far from a gangsta lean,
but my heart is here for hip hop so I'm grounded in this reality to fulfill my dream.
I guess I gotta use metaphors, similes, and outlandish verbs to ever be heard,
gotta roll with the tightest squad to ever receive pleasant words.
When I scroll it's guaranteed to be negative retinas watching my thoughts,
either somebody wanna battle, it was okay, it's aiight, it's too long, or it's too short.
Even the best lost their life for being so nice,
it's a cycle cause the good ones on here are being crucified just for expressing thier lyrical rights,
but I can't wait for the day when one of ya'll say only God can judge that'll be the best spiritual advice.
If you ain't known respect ya get none,
today everybody's hot spit like dudes on RB was born with flames in their lungs.
I compose notes of rhythm that works for me not stir up controversy,
I'm a big boy so constructive criticism could never hurt me,
but when you jerks say I'm not feeling that with no meaning that's what irks me.
Everybody has an opinion like every ass has a hole,
but some cats would post garbage and expect to get percentage in a poll.
We gotta beg for love in this section no affection,
text wars on open mic so only God is my protection.
I'm a grown man so I could take anything ya'll say about my lyrical picture in this web frame,
but ya'll steady taking shots at IM the Immortal so I never shed any red stains.
I keep returning to ya screens like Nick at Nite classics,
and if you look real hard you could see giggles between my riddles I'm steady laughing at you bastards.
After I release this I know I'll have at least 3 that'll say I did'nt like it,
but you know what it's peace homes cause you did'nt write it.
I express myself like this to control my emotions and let my grudge be free,
prayfully I'll hush some of my critics cause only God can be a judge to me.

Chorus:
Only God can judge me now is what Pac' said,
so much violent talk instead of silent walks that's why people are shot dead.
Everyone's a critic to another man's art,
I remember good hip hop the mid-eighties with jams in the park.
Haters today with negativity like females and chicks so moody,
but only God can be my judge until then I let you fags play Judge Judy. (2x)

Ad-Libs:
Yo this is me man. It was a feeling that came over me that had to be revealed ya heard.

Cause' somebody got something to say. Come on take shots, I got on my teflon this time chump.

Thank you God, cause only you can have the final word.
Peace to all them real rappers out there who are holding it down for this entire hip hop community.

LOve is LOve all the time peoples.
ONE!

o.k, The "verse" coulda been cut into 2 verses which woulda made this go alot better. The First part of the verse:
Crews against crews but we still only on the net,
ya'll hating me when we still have'nt made it out the burbs and projects yet.
Be cool money ya still working at McDonald's and on your demo,
but got the nerve to talk to me like you dropped 5 hits and got a dropped benzo.
Wishing you were in the club with big name record execs. to build and mingle,
criticizing my picture like you made 3 albums and about to make ya next single,
like you've been in the game for a minute prince status and you already trying to elevate to a symbol.
You cats kill me on here with the replies ya drop,
I guess the trend now is to hate to rise to the top,
the more ya'll study BET and MTV the more ya'll write the lies ya watch.
Bottom man say word^ to the man above so I'm gonna keep writing and serve the man above,
one day the lyrical pictures I paint will demand ya hugs some words just deserve the love.
Used to write in caps so I calmed it down when everybody told me to stop,
the way this culture push you away sometimes it makes me wanna run the alternative route and jump into pop.
- Was hott, it flowed well, had meaning, good wordplay too...

But from then on it kinda lost me a bit....Felt a bit like you were feeding off "Only God Can Judge me", but anyway...

OVERALL:6/10

AIIGHT COOL, GOOD LOOKIN' DUNNY!

yo that was tight man had a lot of good lines loved the chorus. Keep elevatin though........there's always room for improvement?

good piece man i was really feling it keep up the good work

GOOD LOOKS FOLK!

good song, good message. deep shit.
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^ what kind of replies are those... ^


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this was a ok piece i felt most of the verse this was cool keep it coming..1

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