HOOK X2
what is suicide, but a human mind
unstable and un-able to see the true you inside
lucks fabled it's just labled so you don't choose to die
consumes your heind sight, livin' a blind life
I'm right...

wraped in plastic, frantic, on ya last breath, start to panic.//
a manic depressive's life, hard ta grasp it.//
imagine you had it, your only way out's as an addict.//
doin' lines of coke, ecstacy--> and hits of acid.//
try'n ta create a smoke screen in a sense-->
to opress these feelings you have.//
feeling so bad, fault placed on yo-mom and dad.//
friends who werent there, and the family that doesn't care.//
so despared, sit with a blank stare, it ain't fair.//
life ain't fair, all this stryfe ain't fair.//
your pleight drives you to the knife blade there.//
why wait there?... Kill ya-self; take the easy way out....

HOOK X2
what is suicide, but a human mind
unstable and un-able to see the true you inside
lucks fabled it's just labled so you don't choose to die
consumes your heind sight, livin' a blind life
I'm right...

hallucinations caused by loosin' patience.//
and a lack of sleep, like "imovane" with no booze to take it.// {imovane's a STRONG sleeping pill}
a slow pain seems to chew your brain stem.//
hate tempts, deep breaths ain't helpin' like drownin',
can't escape them, the voices, in your head pounding.//
louder and louder until you can't count them.//
can't help it, so you help them, 'cause more carnage than helter skelter.//
realize your actions and melt then, you feel like nothing.//
no hope or shelter, broken outer, inside you're explodin'
no control or help-near, you've chosen.. you're goin' without care...
Kill ya-self; take the easy way out....

HOOK X2
what is suicide, but a human mind
unstable and un-able to see the true you inside
lucks fabled it's just labled so you don't choose to die
consumes your heind sight, livin' a blind life
I'm right...

revel in thoughts of self destruction,
the devil himself couldn't help your concience
you want this, clenched fist concealing your death wish
counting the seconds 'till your neck's slit
the only method ta end it is reckless
still a decent person, not cursing, going to heck
with no-one knowin' respect, as you lower ya head
before you know it you'll be dead, white sheets red
ya life bleeds while your heart beats it's last steps
breath growin' cold, regrets flowin' as you begin to know you lost control
thoughts molded through gothic rock and roll
or the raps that told you to cock it lock and load
blackness takes over as your concience goes....

HOOK X2
what is suicide, but a human mind
unstable and un-able to see the true you inside
lucks fabled it's just labled so you don't choose to die
consumes your heind sight, livin' a blind life
I'm right...

this is going to be up in audio in a few days.. I've already recorded it, just need to do some fine tuning....

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TIGHT BUT FROM YOU I EXPECT NO LESS

thx yo... uppin'

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Tight Shit Man..8.4/10

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This is a dope sig.

NICE DROP HERE BLUNT. WELL THOUGHT OUT W/ EACH WORD, AND THE HOOK IS DOPE AS WELL. YOU HAVE BEEN REALLY GOING THROUGH SOME THINGS RECENTLY. KEEP YA HEAD UP KID, AND KEEP WRITING FOR RELEASE. ONE!

damn, very deep song. good message!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this was hot ish nice drop mang 1..

yo, IM... I ain't suicidal at all... this was basically a message describing what I think about people and their minds when they goin' thru a hard time... ne-way.. thx 4 the feed.. 1

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Didn't you post this before? hmmm
well, tom, this was dope.
You should really do an audio of it.
it didn't have great vocab, but it put everything in plain english, emphasizing the point.
I'd like to collab on a topic like this dude.
Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

a'ight... an' yeah I posted the first two verses up b4 and I decided to add another verse 'cause I wanted to record it.. lol.. 1.. atleast someone actually reads my shit.. j/k

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