Caught my eye so fast like the end of a fish hook
Now that i've seen your cover i wanna finish your book
I only needed one look, and you took my by surprise
my mind raced and my heart jumped and you whispered "hi"
i tried to reply but i lost all vocab ever enhanced
you walked right by as i stared but you only took one glance
my mind danced, am i lost in my thoughts, am i in my own world?
am i sleepin or awake becuz i have finally found my dream girl

As the game went on and the crowed cheered with joy
i thought, she doesnt want me, shes just lookin fo a boy
Gettin annoyed, i couldnt resist not exchanging words
i felt my heart pount, and tru love is what would soon be learned
my stomach turned as i approached her smile and laughter
what am i doing i thought, im being a fool, so i just walked past her

but shes the one im after so i began to breath once again
i walked over and she recognized me from earlier with my friends
my mind was bent, she was beautiful as the lights glared
she smiled at me and sat with me becuz she knew i was scared
she really did care, becuz months went by and it seemed like forever
every weekend was spent with sleepovers, were were always together
i had to be clever, came the day that i gave all my courage to ask
i knew it was goin to be confusing, but i knew it could last
hours passed as i waited for her reply in my inbox
starin into space as i heard the ticks go by on my clock
she finally talked, my heart was filled with joy as i saw her reply
"of course i'll be with you, I love you now and until the day i die"


I fell in love with a girl....I dont care what others think....

Replys please

This was heat nice drop mang keep it coming..1

Return the favor..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62347

Thanks man....up

this shit was hot keep spittin yo

return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=61711

no doubt man....Ima check yours out....Uppin

real nice shit...but arent you a girl? ...no hate just wondering cz i like being in the eyes of peeps too...

yeah i am

if ya got the time return tha favor (sorry about replying agan but i 4got)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=62052

Yeah ima check everyones out, Just give me some replys, and drop a link to yours......

yo slik...sorry bout putting it in here but ur PM box is full...you wanna collab one something with me? I was thinking a 2 bar for 2 bar back and forth thing...1 from the guys eyes 1 from the girls...its like the first meeting of two lovers...i know its been done before but i think we can make it happen....you interested?

not to free post: Slik, I have gained a whole new respect for you when I read that piece that is why i sent that ^^^

i def wanna.......

aight then PM your AIM or whatever instant chat name so we can talk easier...ok?

yo.....freestylemyrhyme is my AIM name.............................can i have more replys on this...thanks

Im lookin fo a little mo replys