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07-01-03, 12:17 PM | #1 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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B.R.E Presents-110% Raw
IP: 44B7 B6C4
Give me that beat, lock n' load, summers back, ready to pile up heat
unable to defeat,the evil inside,just blaze on the tracks,like i was smokin the beat craziness, got the lazinesss, beaten,lyrical prowess, like that of a panther realness, goin over all this, certified rappin, wit certificates of authenticity but then i got the shit on lock, iv'e gone crazy, freddy krueger, won't be rippen me 110% raw just spittin the streets and leavin you dessimated, like chinese men with beef crazy upside down just puttin out words flippin the scripts as easy as flippin them birds top of the line nothin better subject matter servin niggas hot like bar be que food platters B.R.E on top of the game like we never been stopped hot the old days up, two feet+your mouf=your dropped mathematical equations runnin thru my mind like you plus a mic= the end of time civilized man in history never felt braggin like this maybe poor in reality, but rap makes me rich check it out takn you ripped up like you me Jason my mind plus a mic, will have veteran pulse racin even not my best piece, my words won't make no sense your rhymes suck in the present, due to all their past tense Subjectable tendencies to rip anyone rappings a game, don't mean it has to be fun because 2 months ago, as a mindless newbie you would see me joined city life, then left to join B.R.E never left after that cuz we the best in the business killin all opposin us, then killin witnesses who saw us killin the witness because 110% raw in the game you have to be soft spot says R.I.P to Aaliyah, Left eye,jam master jay,pun, pac,and Biggie
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07-01-03, 04:43 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: AC21 E638
Dope Piecve dawg..Although I Didn't Really See The Concept But Anwyay:
The Opening Was Hott, Good Vocab! Throught The Verse You Had Tight Wordplay, Vocab Was Brutal Most Of The Way Throught, Flow as Well! The ending Was To Say The Least Meaningful, Made GOod Referance Too The Fallen. BUt Lets Let Them R.I.P Yeah? Overall:8/10 |
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07-01-03, 10:51 PM | #3 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 44B7 B6C4
thanks man, uppin on this piece
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07-02-03, 09:17 AM | #4 | ||||||
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man this is nice shi t worked well concept was a lil hard 2 understand but very good non the less
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07-02-03, 11:24 AM | #5 | |||||||
Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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IP: CDB3 B6BF
not bad.. wasn't this supposed to be a collab?.. lol.. I liked it, flow was hard to follow but the rest was on point 4 sure..
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07-03-03, 12:23 AM | #6 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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IP: 8BEC CACE
thr remix was gonna be te collab
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07-03-03, 12:50 AM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: BB21 1693
that shyt is nice nigga, keep it up......
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07-03-03, 02:13 AM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 399E F0FD
Pretty tight shit. Keep spittin. I hope to see more out of ya.
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07-03-03, 06:02 AM | #9 | |||||||
BANNED For Being An Idiot
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IP: C22E FA17
this was some good shit m8, some greta lines, some nice wordplay maybe a tiny lack of vocab but it daint really show much coz it was dope, well done m8, keep writing
Eborted Verdict- B (nearly a B+) |
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