*Keslo:"yo E Z, u heard bout that girl who gate raped and robbed by that crack head..?"
*E Z:"yeah,poor girl,12 years old,and dying of aids allready,all for some milk coupons and 15 quid"
*Keslo:"damn,i mean,money aint a thing if u aint got non,but to go and do that,his ass is SLEEAAZY"




whats the universe built on,if we hadnt got no money//
all the silly lil things we do,like shoot a brudda in the tummy//
its kinda funny,cuz i seen allot of greedy ppl sayin cash aint thing//
wen theyre walkin up and down the street with teeth and chains that bling//
bring the gin,because its time-to-tell a ghetto story//
like the time "B" got his legs crushed wen he tried to jack a speeding lorrie//
i heard em tore see,i saw the bonse click as he tried to run//
and the reason he did it was he needed money to spend and have some fun//
plus ghetto scum other wise known as the local waster//
had a taster of thiefin bags off little ladies,and also raped her//
he probly needed crack,but most of all he needed paper//
i remember all those years ago he had a job,as a hotshot water//
ill see him later,pull-a-gun and probly-pop-one//
cuz lil girls dont need to die a young age of H.I.V or AIDS son//
come on and save one,let your shit FLY like beannie SEAGLE//
adress ya world and drop a verse like ya dropin a speach to all ya people//
this lifes a steep hill,you need some cash to be respected//
george bush had all the money he needed way before he got elected//
is life selected,were we put here to struggle cashles//
let all the richest in the world laugh at the ghetos that are so helples//
so let me tell this,if u aint got none,then it aint easy//
but living life with wads of cash while watchin the hungry die is sleazy//

uppin for feed back..!!

yo come on ppl....UPPIN..!!

yo this shit was actually aight. Wasnt the best but wasnt bad. If you keep elevatin you'll do better. And the story was great keep spittin.

7/10

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im havin to agree with withersman and shit...
this was an average drop.
7/10

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n!ce 1 man good content, intresting subject, but i liked it your very creative, good work m8 jus keep ur head up n elevate dude

This shit was aight, good topic, content a little thin at first, better vocab and better wordplay needed, but the last 6 lines are so was real good, liked the bush line
Keep writing and elevate dawg

Eborted Verdict-C-