Maven:
perpetuality gets me, I'm stuck in this place forever
the sun shines, trying futily to break through stormy weather
you're the sun you see, and you destroy my very being
the heat of your memory affects vision, you're all I'm seeing
now and forever, you said, well, I wish that you had
fuck love, passion eludes me, this mime is forever sad
I act out my emotions, depicting struggle and hate
optimism is unreachable, drained like rain to storm grates
I'm sedate and irate, looking for synonyms for my anger
helium filled hearts make me pass out, like horse dander
you just started it off, opening minds like so many books
seeing intuitive thoughts while I hover over the looks
and my mouth goes dry under your all-seeing eyes
discovering lies, where the truth dirties clean skies
and procreating brainwaves of stained glass quality
fact is, in the end my back is to the wall, you see?

Camarac:
Diamond sight blinded by the serpents sapphire tongue
Live fast,
die young and save on government funds.
Take each day as it comes,
gospel speech is not the boss of me
Living prophecy,
forced to follow this fortune cookie philosophy
In all honesty,
I started searching for somewhere I belong
Only to be slammed back on the foundations I built my dreams upon.
With demons gone,
Removed from the void I stop and sleep through
Where the worlds the Oyster
Of a generation that hates sea food.
I speak to my inner self
Get sea sick just looking at oceans
So its weird my Voyage to success,
Took place among Waves of emotion
So make way for the hopeless,
The children of the corn with no focus
Too afraid to hold on to those lost forgotten moments

Peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

First Guy Came The Best. .

naw, the second cat ownded, nucca!

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

^Tickle My Sloth. .

^Werd to your motherboard

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

Shiznit's Thoughts:

let me first say that it was sooooo sweet...u 2 love each other...

hehe

the fact that MAven started it with such aggressively great astounding words to begin with...the second (Camarac) blasted from the middle to the last...hehe

the content was well though out and i liked how camarac structured his verse...it came out strong...

Maven's verse was great...the flow definitely fits the whole piece..props for that

over all nice drop...good joB!

p.s.

i love the title...sounds intriguing...coming from the both of you..

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^ Werd.
You Can Tickle My Sloth Anytime. .

in a strictly heterosexual way....

oh, and my verse was about a chick. We jsut keystyled about what was in the mind at the time, get what I'm sayink?
PEEsE yo!

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

This was a good open mic i liked this ish it was great..

My favorite lines..

Nice..

hahahaha.....


anyway....dope shit....both of ya....wudnt expect anythin less from u Cam...!!


anyway.....check my shit ......Hard and Harsh

^ Done already bredjin. .

goin superman

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

lol... nice man... which one's you understatement?... I'm assuming it's (maven) not sure tho... lol, ne-way I liked the flow of the second guy (Camarac) his shit kinda sparkled... lol, I liked how maven had a really pictoral rhyme, there was a lot ov visualization burried in the piece form both now that I look again... keep it up 1...

and Pat call me some time man, 510-1091

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^uppsie.