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Old 07-07-03, 01:18 PM   #1
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"Don' Fuck Wit Us" feat. The_64_Killa

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[Intro]

(Gangsta One): "Don' fuck wit us..."

[Chorus]
These niggaz r crazy, they end up dead//
Don' fuck wit us//
These niggaz be crazy, pop 'em in da head//
Don' fuck wit us//
Niggaz, don' BE crazy//
Don' fuck wit us//
Like I said before, u end up dead, 'nough said...//

[Verse 1]

(Gangsta One): Yo check this shi' out...
I'm sick of fake niggas tryin' to mess with this//
Some fuckin' butt-humpin mr. college professor iris//
And I'm sick of fake gangstaz tryin to battle or write a verse//
An' there's millions of 'em, stickin' 'roun like a fuckin curse//
Ya need 'X Gon' Give it to Ya'-like hip-hop classics//
I'm TIRED of these fuckin' homos' antics//
They try to be niggaz and try to act gangsta//
Vibin' up and down the streets listenin' to Wanksta//
Fuck 'em, bitch ass white boy comin' from a rich nieghbourhood//
We show 'em what niggas are really like, WE FROM THE 'HOOD//
Let's go pop them fuckin' fakes up//
Tha's righ', we gonna fuck them wannabes up!//
Tha's righ, bitch the game has been won//
Wannabe's pissin' me off, they end up done//
I'm like the Grim Reaper comin' for yo soul//
Live ya life now, 'cause ya ain' goin' ta se 2k-fo//
This is the purest in gangsta hi-hop//
My ryhmes, they flow and flow, and they don' fuckin' stop//
Niggaz!

[ChorusX2]

[Verse 2]

(The_64_Killa: J-Day): Listen Up... Aiyyo..
These nigga want it, so they get it Dat bitch want dick, then I'll hit it
Leave ya neck open, I'll slit it We want money, "Let's Get It"//
Im pissed off so dont test me Just let this fuckin nigga be
I'll put a nigga-on-lockdown like he's "Sweet Tooth", tha mad clown//
Press charges for manslaughter But u killed ur-own-daughter?
I-dont-get how u like me dead But Im not even red//
Ever-since I started-rappin Niggaz-talk about-who they be cappin
Like-I-said-b4, Ima gangsta and Im Out to kill a fuckin wanksta
DOA G.O. The New Collab Fuck-ya
Hatin ass niggaz that want us to flab//
Claimin u da best rapper in-da United States?
But u cant keep a quik flow at quik bit-rates//
So kill tha beat cause Im done wit dis fuckin flow
Cause-I-wanna kick back wit a "Black N Mild" and a ho//
BI-ATCH!!!

[ChorusX2]

[Outro]

(Gangsta One): "Don' fuck wit us..."
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Old 07-07-03, 01:44 PM   #2
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Feedback dawgz!!!
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Old 07-07-03, 01:49 PM   #3
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This was an aight collab , Pretty simplistic Lyrics , nuthin caught my attention while i was reading through ya all verses , both of ya all lacked Vocab and wordplay......Tha chorus was aight.....Overall I give this collab 6/10........elevate
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Old 07-07-03, 02:01 PM   #4
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A'ight thanks fo the feedback...

Mo feedback, dawgz!!!
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Old 07-07-03, 02:48 PM   #5
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basic, simplistic, kinda reflects ya rank
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Old 07-07-03, 03:06 PM   #6
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Yo, thx dawg. Mo feedback!
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Old 07-07-03, 04:17 PM   #7
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Uppin fo feedback dawgz.............
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Old 07-07-03, 10:17 PM   #8
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Feedback is great dawgz....keep it comin'....
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Old 07-07-03, 10:54 PM   #9
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This was a simple piece but i liked it it was coolness keep trying though you'll get better at it just stick to it..1
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Old 07-07-03, 11:38 PM   #10
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ok, stop playing the gangster card in here...it dont fly with most vets...its pansy and anyone can write it...write something deep and meaningful THEN and only then will i consider you an open mic head...no hate just input

return the favor if ya got time: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=64109
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