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07-09-03, 01:18 AM
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..Areonda..
IP: 94F8 F49C
You are what keeps me moving, steady rockin and groving,
Always making things soothing, my heart for you is booming.. Im sorry for what ive done in the past, everything is a blast, Still have those pictures that brought are feelings in a flash.. Touched my heart, I feel your love every time were apart, I'll fight for you, And with you my bite is bigger then my bark.. We've bonded, you took my virginity at the age of twenty one, Its you that makes me shine bright all day, You are the one.. Im ready to help you raise are child once we have them, You've been there for me once things got slim and grim.. To me your my second to none, Without you I'd have a gun, Ready for that bullet wound to the head, but ive become the sun.. |
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07-09-03, 01:39 AM
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IP: C3D4 A284
aww...how sweet...u must really be in love...lol..nice drop kid....wow you made it to the age of 21....i'm proud of you!! ...lol..God bless..1..
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07-11-03, 01:11 PM
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IP: 4F2B 4EA2
This was nice. Sweet in a way. But also with a bit of grit too.
You came through strong with simplicity, and solid use of imagery.. ..resp.. BY the way, Areonda is a nice name. Last edited by varentao : 07-11-03 at 01:15 PM. |
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