Ye that was good everything bout it was tight the hook was tight the verses were good the quality was great. Ye you need to get signed that song was dope keep it up.

Thanks man appreciate it.

This shit was put together really well...nice verses, good hook, and sick beat....really tight song right here, yall are good...peace

Thanks guys

tight shit fellaz,definitly a song that could be on the radio for the summertime,it was catchy enough,sound quality was nice too and mp3 dont help for sound on the i-net,,but this was straight illness
keep dropin..and be sure to check me out at http://www.soundclick.com/riproductionz....peace fellaz

shit man is that beyonce doing the hook...man seriously this whole song is dope mad verses production is mad crazy cept at the start vocals need to be up a bit but otherwise its dope

^^ Ill fix that, thanks

.......WelComE to WilL SmiTh.........
the only decent spittin was last dude.....rest was bull shit and corny....until the last dude i was contemplating whether to turn it off.....or just um hope it would end some time soon.....girl could sing....it would just be refreshing if yall didnt rip will smith and gave her, her own lyrics......and props tah mans at the end.....

Hey its corny enough 2 be on 2 diff radio stations and be played in 7 clubs. Man this song must really suck.

....o...my...damn...i didnt realize i was talking to a real life rap artist here....i could get shot uh oh....oh no ...i forgot im supposed to be on your dick and am not allowed to give you actual constructive critisism....because helpin a brotha elevate is against the rules....sorry....

Get shot?
what are you talkin about.
bro you can give critisism anytime I recommend that, but the way you did it was unprofessional and immature. So my reply reflected your attitude.
good day

lol im just pissed ause my ass is getting slept on and i just want some one to fuckin reply to my shit damnit!!!! reply damnit reply!!!!! my shit been looked at a thousand damn times no one leavve feed back....