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Old 07-23-03, 08:23 AM   #1
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for dawgs BLUNT AND CRASH (ORDO ABACHO)

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YO IF YOU HATE ME SON LET ME SEE YOUR HANDS(EMENCE SHOW OF HANDS)DAMN!
AIGHT I SEE THAT, IF YOU RECONIZE IM ILL FELLAS HOLLA(COMPLETE SILENCE)GAY BASTARDS
SO IF YOU MY FANS THROW SOME LOVE(THE CROWD TRIPPIN)
FUCK YOU GUYS

Like me or not...im hot so i dont give a fuck-
on any JOINT i hit, i be BLAZEN UP-
it's NON CENTZ bitch-
gasoline script,spit-
over my larenex maken my tongue a lit wik-
flip-on every m.c. as a 9 to 5-
freestylen 59... each a way to make sure you die-
im the most HIGH-no LIGH-no SCURD-
but on any verse i rap BLUNT serving HERBS-
who spits some of the illest lines-?
who so sick that m.c.'s flatline-
if they bit mines-?
and if they copy and paiste even one time-
im RAW sexually transmitting the VIRUS in your hard drive-
i dont care im an alkaline with rhyme-pointed to you mind-
a DEATH CERTIFICATE is the only way you get signed-
i dont need fanclubs-
and some kid stalking-cause of how my thoughts be talking-
till i become a fan of a 38 snub-
i dont need groopie love-
for a quick nut ill stick dick to cock riders-
they keep it tighter-
there's no match im the lighter-
placen the games in flames-
in battle i burn birth certificates cause you NO NAMES-
dont exsist-
hard punchlines written by a steel fist-
drop flow and golden shower you when im pist.
im in the mix-nah fuck it im on the original and the remix-
plus the sample that made your a number one on the hit list-
and i spit this-like a temper mental massikist-
fucken m.c.’s and getting charged as a rapist.
RAPE NIGGUZ AND GET CHARGED AS A RACIST-
battle christians as a faithless athiest-
it aint funny-
haten on me is cock blocking my change so FUCK YOU MONEY-


HOOK:
if your fans-like stan-
battle me in hell..but i'll be damned-
cause loosing in this life is not in my plans-
loosing in the past one is easier to understand-
but from this point on im the period which means i define the end.
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Old 07-23-03, 08:25 AM   #2
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Hmm, you got a unique style - and it is nice too. I liked this drop, a different kind of open mic. With a whole new concept to it. Very nicely done and well written. Even tho it is in peotry format or what ever. It was still madd nice. Keep at it homie..


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Old 07-23-03, 09:41 AM   #3
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tha's the style right there... u've developed that choppey style into a fuckin' waterfall dawg.. nice, feelin' the rythm in it 4 sure.. nice wordplay as usual, I saw my name so I had to peep it.. this is a way betterstyle for you than b4, I like the shorter lines an' shit.. 1
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Old 07-23-03, 10:37 AM   #4
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thank you both i like the fact that people notice an improvment i will work hard to continue to advance
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Old 07-23-03, 01:47 PM   #5
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Old 07-23-03, 04:39 PM   #6
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lol
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Old 07-25-03, 08:16 AM   #7
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Old 07-25-03, 08:36 AM   #8
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decent verse
not the best shit i've seen though
flowed very well....easy to read and follow
stayed on point through out....some nice punch lines had me laughing in a few places
overall pretty nice...and also different
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