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07-27-03, 06:10 AM | #1 | ||||||
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ok so i jack a wildchild beat and come up with this
here are the lyrics followed by a link(s) to the audio this was a fun little rip i wrote to test out my new mic hit me up with your thoughts i wasnt going for like incredible depth or mad wordplay just a nice flow so dont get all gay about it. Show time Lost at sea, I’ve come to see the real me Welcome to this deranged state of reality has me tied down to the earth when I’m reaching for the stars Breaking free from my shell to only see the other walls That surround this sound sending me homeward bound Only to loose the respect that I never really found And it has to be now because I’m not down with never Always trying to jump me thinking that I cant be clever Forced to sever ties when lies shut out the lights Forced to send others to sleep consequence of stupid fights Despite what I may write and proclaim within a story I’m still the same kid when I wake up in the morning And It’s conforming to the norm that scares me half the time that’s why I battled for perfection in the words of written rhyme And at times I may loose, down but never for the count Its coming back to show the world exactly what I’m all about To alleviate the doubt when I’m dealing with the devil When I face the faces of the hate and don’t allow my knees to revel I’m not a rebel, just another scouted soul Trying to cancel out the voices as the fight for the control Of me, a child of the muse just known as B I’ve had a lot of dreams in life but all I want is to see This happen, magic attaches grasping to fasten To my soul it shows me lights so I know this all will happen I cant be caught napping sleepers know they wont achieve Because when your living in a dream its hard just to believe in all from writting to recording this took 2 hours tops but i was watching espn2 so i was a bit distracted haha pizeace AUDIO Lo Fi Hi Fi |
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07-27-03, 06:16 PM | #2 | ||||||
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dont fucking even start sleeping on me
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07-28-03, 02:08 AM | #3 | ||||||
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wtf what is this?
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07-28-03, 03:01 AM | #4 | ||||||
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fuck the sleepers yo..this was pretty damn ill man..i was feelin it...keep it up yo !
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07-28-03, 03:59 AM | #5 | |||||||
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yo man this was a pretty tight verse
Flow: It flowed smoothly to me, nice man...8/10 Wordplay: Nice wordplay here, not to much but good amount...8/10 Concept: Very nice man, you stayed with it the whole way...9/10 Vocab: Nice vocab here...9/10 Overall: This was a tight verse man, keep it up...8.5/10 check my piece out "Mistakes" http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68292 |
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07-28-03, 05:16 AM | #6 | |||||||
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thanks man hit up my soundclick peace |
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07-29-03, 07:01 AM | #7 | ||||||
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UPING! YALLLLLLLL
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07-29-03, 03:36 PM | #8 | ||||||
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i know we can do better the 2 real replies
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07-29-03, 06:27 PM | #9 | ||||||
BANNED For Dumbassness
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nice drop
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07-30-03, 07:40 AM | #10 | |||||||
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wow man thanks for that deep input i thought 1 liners got banned? haha ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh |
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07-30-03, 08:20 AM | #11 | |||||||
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Rhyming/Flow
Was Hott. I Read It With The Audio In The Background, And It Flowed Well, Could Have Used More MUlti's But..meh...8/10 Vocab/Wordplay Was Good, You Don't Hear Much Vocab In Audio Pieces, But You had It n' Blended It Into Your Own Style...word...7/10 Concept/Topic What Was The Actual Concept Cos i Could'nt GRasp It...5/10 Overall 7/10 - I LIke It, The Advangate Of Being Able To Listen To It As I Read Was Dope, Keep Droppin' Them Like This! Quote:
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07-30-03, 05:38 PM | #12 | |||||||
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there was no real concept. its like let words coem to u and put them together. a lot of my pieces just mesh. bits and pieces of broken messages taht all make sense when you just think about it. thanks for the reply good lookign out peace -B |
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07-30-03, 05:38 PM | #13 | |||||||
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there was no real concept. its like let words coem to u and put them together. a lot of my pieces just mesh. bits and pieces of broken messages taht all make sense when you just think about it. thanks for the reply good looking out peace -B |
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