ok, 8 lines, u spit first,
no pre-written, bitten, recycled etc.
take your time, you'll need it

Lets go!
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Jerk this bitch, defining the illness cause my work is sick
You 'beating ass'! what makes you think you 'murkin shit'
Wack words, dyslexic, see you flee cause i smack herbs
Name fits ya well, cause eveyone seeing ya verse 'backwords'
Stack up starr will kill you, smack ya eyes t'ill they real blue
Ya shits kind like 'manican skin' cause no one ever 'feels you'
Battle this newbie, callout thread he swares he school me
Ya like 'fake gold' in the lines, theres no way this kid 'fools me'

8 lines....quick key....

This novice flat-lined before my verse even started
He’s makin’ Vanilla Ice look like a free-style artist
My balance is on target/ I never do it sloppily
This game isn't your style/ it’s nothing like monopoly
This kid’ll be a ghost by the time he gets 10 post
Meqa will protest his own death like he was FRENCH TOAST*
So when you're merked after this it'll seem like deja vu
I only used 8 lines and had twice the rhymes as you




* You kinda have to think about that French toast line

wasn't the greatest battle but it was decent for a quick 8 liner
i suppose
anyway D' got this one little bit better flow and punches
not too much to judge from though, just and honest vote
vote-Dyslexic
hit me up honesty please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=70901

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Sorry about the wakc freepostin but can you ppl pleez vote on the battle:


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=70902

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Vote=dyslexic
better flow and punches but its only 8 lines so hard to call anyways nice battle no hate props to both
yo can you guys hit this up with an honest vote?
thanx
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i say that dyslexic got this, he had better punches and i think he came harder which swayed my desicion in his direction.
For a newbie tho that wasn't a bad verse at all, it was a good battle that could have been better, but good shit from both yall.
vote= dyslexic
Hit this up is bein slep on badly!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68847

its hard to vote on 8 lines close battle dyslexic had the edge

vote =dyslexic


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on the real that nigga is wack....i had so many direct punches ...No ones 'feeling ya' verses like 'manican skin' ...

on the real i hit anoither dickryding site...

Jeez, does anybody get the French toast line? uppin-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Vote Dyslexic....overall better verse, although not really a great battle

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