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aight. Xecution. Your flow was choppy..the ryme scheme.
but vocab was good. the punches were aight too, could
have been written better tho. Your punches seemed Hard,
but the fact that they were choppy made the me lose the Flow/
Rythim Alot. Nothing really stood out, except for the Hercules Line
and the last liitle part you had...

i bring-flavor,lyrical human being-craver,battlen me couldnt be-braver/
if you thinkin of killen me in this battle, check ya self kid cause thats some dangerous behavior/

^^^that was sick..even tho it was plain.

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Rappad..a few of your punches stood out. i liked them.

I'll murder you now, name-the-spot cuz i easily manipulate ill-legal like racist cops//
You have the fakest-drops and you get ate-a-lot so dining on your verse will be the only time I taste a loss//

that was nice..funny at the end..

I'm slappin this hoe with blows causing damaging hits//
Make him "kick a bucket" like when a janitor trips//

i liked that too. Never heard that one before. lol..

We playing dykes while X hoping to get his name in lights//
But we all know he "pre-writes", like ancient times//

...that was your choppiest line. this could have been a aight lil thing. but the ryme scheme is fucked up.

Overall, i think x had better creativity but not as good flow.
rappad's verse had some lines that stood out more in a BATTLE

vote=rappad..
sorry i cant POLL vote, but i aint a NEWB.



Fuckin Sleepers…(Poll)

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2405#post742405

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76279

Good battle to both but I'm about 2 break it down.

Complexity=Rappad
Punchlines=X Ecution
Flow=X Ecution
Multis=Rapped
Wordplay=X Ecution
Overall=X Ecution

GOOD SHIT though to both.

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yo i felt the shit of x more........da course said all........
i aint got nuttin to add!

peace out!

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omg wat a fuckin dope battle best ive saw for some time urm really hard to decide h won it was so fuckin close

but urm x jus egded rapped but a lil

1 more vote needed

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upppen more votes needed n when u drop ur vote please make ur explinations legit...thx...1

dope battle guys it was close but heres the breakdown

wordplay=X came wit better wordplay n this battle, but i liked rappads as well

vocab=X go this too, nothing too impressive but still had nice vocab usagehttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=76662 and hit this up to holla

multis=tough cuz neither used multis til the end of each verse, but X had a few more than rappad, so X gets this one

flow=tie, cna really go either way, both lost consistnecy in flow in smoe areas,but then regained it later on, so this is a tie

creativity=X was a little more creative, rappad i like your shit dawg but X go this one too

punches=well, punches win battles and X takes this one again, rappad had some solid shit but X came harder

favorite line= i usually only have one favorite line butthis goes to both, liked these lines the most

X="i bring-flavor,lyrical human being-craver,battlen me couldnt be-braver/
if you thinkin of killen me in this battle, check ya self kid cause thats some dangerous behavior"

rappad=I'll murder you now, name-the-spot cuz i easily manipulate ill-legal like racist cops//
You have the fakest-drops and you get ate-a-lot so dining on your verse will be the only time I taste a loss//

good shit yalldope battle guys it was close but heres the breakdown

wordplay=X came wit better wordplay n this battle, but i liked rappads as well

vocab=X go this too, nothing too impressive but still had nice vocab usage

multis=tough cuz neither used multis til the end of each verse, but X had a few more than rappad, so X gets this one

flow=tie, cna really go either way, both lost consistnecy in flow in smoe areas,but then regained it later on, so this is a tie

creativity=X was a little more creative, rappad i like your shit dawg but X go this one too

punches=well, punches win battles and X takes this one again, rappad had some solid shit but X came harder

favorite line= i usually only have one favorite line butthis goes to both, liked these lines the most

X="i bring-flavor,lyrical human being-craver,battlen me couldnt be-braver/
if you thinkin of killen me in this battle, check ya self kid cause thats some dangerous behavior"

rappad=I'll murder you now, name-the-spot cuz i easily manipulate ill-legal like racist cops//
You have the fakest-drops and you get ate-a-lot so dining on your verse will be the only time I taste a loss//

good shit yall
poll vote=X,
poll vote=X,

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76662 and hit this up aight thanx holla ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

thx 4 the vote!!!!!!!
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one more vote is needed lets go people 1 more vote!!!!!
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