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dopeness.. yes 2 100.00%
no...whack(haters) 0 0%
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Old 08-31-03, 06:43 PM   #1
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WordPlay?

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conflict: these bitches.... think they know wordplay ya know?
Ricochet.: word, they ain't got a clue...
Conflict: they just write they lyrics on they dick...n play wit it
Ricochet.: ... that makes... wordplay... so they think....

*Chrous Conflict*
Put a little Quote...that's all I gotta do to make wordplay,
Consider myself dope...it helps the pain ease inside me,
Ride me, i'm just addin some little decoration to imprees thee,
Genious you see...Adding these make me...C: nigga you consider that wordplay?)

*Conflict*
Hell nah...fake bitches ain't got the grip on the game,
You suck hoes, quotes leavin your status the same,
Even if you climbed everest...you'd still need to elevate,
Explained, My Conflicts Ricochet into minute wordplays,
Swerve kid, the lyrics comin at you like insects on windsheilds,
Cover the view, Splatter my spitts on ya new Bmw,
Still can't flow ya verse...wonder where i can find the reason,
Maybe in africa...with your pollution of quotes dried in the season,
Comin into this game...kid thinks he can just get by,
Herb infested...that's the only way you ranked high,
"Crash", "Smashed" faces like "Cars"...damn i'm tight,
Whoa son, you don't consider that wordplay...right?

*Chrous*
C: Put a little Quote...that's all I gotta do to make wordplay,
R: Consider myself dope...it helps the pain ease inside me,
C: Ride me, i'm just addin some little decoration to imprees thee,
R: Genious you see...Adding these make me...C: nigga you consider that wordplay?)

*Ricochet*
Teach Em About Wordplay, Show These Fools How To Spit,
They Characters Couldn't Drop Nice Without Attitude Counsellors.
^Thats Whut You Need To Be On, Opponents Find It Too Scary,
End Up Either Lost in-sIz-or Had Visits From The Tooth Fairy,
Conflict & The X Soldier, Built 4 War With Any Herbs Rhymes,
Im Fingering Chicks Whilst You Figuring Shit From My 1st Lines,
Need Help? Heres Ya Wordplay- Grab A Dictionary & Have Kids Over,
No. These Niguhs Wudnt Hav Winnin Streaks ....In Stip Poker.
Aight Thats Enuf.. Lesson Almos Done U Fagz Don't Learn,
Probably Drop Shit As Played As "You Couldnt Be "Dope" Smoking Sherm!".
Conflict & Ric Sunning You Lames, Whilst Dickin Hoes,
Wordplay Jus Ran The Open Mic Outta Business... Closed!

*Chrous*
C: Put a little Quote...that's all I gotta do to make wordplay,
R: Consider myself dope...it helps the pain ease inside me,
C: Ride me, i'm just addin some little decoration to imprees thee,
R: Genious you see...Adding these make me...C: nigga you consider that wordplay?)

*Conflict*
Buy some lyrics, i got the reciepts to chock ya to death,
Played in your head, This'll haunt ya so ya neva rest,
Skilled only of makin a few hyphens n such to decorate,
Famous?...Right...Dumbass couldn't get the demo strait,
*Ricochet*
They hella fake, Bungalow rappers, just can't elevate,
Ricochet the Satan, had 2 teach you fags & demon-straight,
i mean it to them, ya'll stupid i can see it again,
type 2 only see rated 18 movies.. with 17 of ya friends stupid....

*Chrous*
C: Put a little Quote...that's all I gotta do to make wordplay,
R: Consider myself dope...it helps the pain ease inside me,
C: Ride me, i'm just addin some little decoration to imprees thee,
R: Genious you see...Adding these make me...C: nigga you consider that wordplay?)
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Old 08-31-03, 07:00 PM   #2
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OO shit that Ricochet cat is on point!

haha come on lets get feedback this wuz hot 4 less than 10 minutes
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Old 08-31-03, 07:46 PM   #3
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Yeah, for a ten minute piece this was pretty good, flow was its strongpoint, although, sorry if this kind of destroys the whole theme / concept of the piece but using "Like" dosent make the lines wordplay, it makes them Similies because your comparing them to something else of a similar nature.

What Richochet did WAS Wordplay such as the "Demon-Straight" and "Rated 18" Lines, Conflicts Were Just Punches, And Quite Old Ones At That, I Remember using An Elevate / Bungalow Punch Back When I First Started In '00, Lol.

All In All, Not A Bad Effort, Flow Kept It Up Nicely, Internals Helped, Some Ok Woprdplay, Your Styles Complimented Each other Pretty Nicely, Not Bad My Young Protege's. .

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Oh, And Reply To Mine: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8232#post748232
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Old 08-31-03, 08:11 PM   #4
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Um...

Well...

...This was a tite peice from both ya soliders...i was feeling the wordplay...flow was dope throughout...You kept meaning in ya lines even tho there was no topic

That's all...Tite collab...worked really well

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Old 09-01-03, 01:43 PM   #5
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i was makin fun of newb's... i was doin that to make fun of them
i may be doin this on audio... so u'll understand if ya don't
feel it now
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Old 09-01-03, 01:49 PM   #6
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good job hoes. concept was different...

flow was always present, vocab was ight..

C: Put a little Quote...that's all I gotta do to make wordplay,
R: Consider myself dope...it helps the pain ease inside me

^i liked this the most

7/10.


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Old 09-01-03, 04:50 PM   #7
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LMAO f u.. pimp?

anyway letz get more i guess..
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Old 09-01-03, 06:21 PM   #8
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Pretty good colabo here....nice verses from both, flowed in together pretty well....Especially liked the bar.....

Thats Whut You Need To Be On, Opponents Find It Too Scary,
End Up Either Lost in-sIz-or Had Visits From The Tooth Fairy,

Good shit right there.....overall give it a 8/10
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Old 09-01-03, 06:25 PM   #9
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^uh huh.. aint no1 got teeth meta's like me

so ar i done wisdom and now insizor.. next is dentine somehow

lmao
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Old 09-01-03, 10:26 PM   #10
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