10 bars ....and remember the rules

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I check in .....so check and spit.............................................. ..............................................

Cheaking-In ...
Will Drop Soon
Good Luck ....
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As in bars do you mean 2 lines - 1 bar?
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You need to tell me or im doing it has 1 bar = 2 lines ...
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nah....10 bars means 10 lines............................................. .................................................. .......

*Immix Grabs Mic*

Demolish your hopes and desire of winning
a battle ... with this verse /
You'll be fading away before all of my
... lines are dispursed / 1
My vibe gets you hurt ... no chance for
you to catch my gimick /
You'll gimme my first win and your
second loss belongs to immix / 2
I'll throw globes for punches and put
you in a world of pain /
My lyriks smurk at you ... while you cry
massive tears of shame / 3
Rb raised there wanted level as im
keying a whole merking squad /
Tuck 'n' roll because this is a battle
you'll wanna dodge / 4
Your verse lost its speed ... who cut
your power /
I'll split your brain and devour, you collapse
out of no where like the 2 towers / 5
My style cant be coppied you cant
Rock what I Wear /
You read my verse with your ass on the edge
of your computer chair / 6
Just sit and stare ... let this merking
make an imprint in your head /
You got another challenge but my words
already knocked you dead / 7
Your nothing, you could never pull
the sword from the stone /
Kew's talent locked in the past it will
never find its way to your dome / 8
Might of had an easy win but this newb
is quite decieving /
Hooked up a lie detector test to see if he could
even believe what he's reading / 9
Kew's no chance to give me a beating,
you lack everything I have /
Theres not a possiblity you could elevate
... your just plain bad / 10

Fuck Man .. See You Took To Long
You Said 10 Bars So I Gave You It ...

Match What I Got ...

DaMn ...

immix stand no chance facing the God kew//
lace crew,body in snotbox,who am eating is you?//
who?you couldn't "M" press me even if you are 6 in a phone dial//
I ducked your verse,you're like vanila ice trying to change style//
while,I leave you pedophile sucking nuts sack//
swallow cocks,"yack" love it better when it's black//
you seems having a sexual crisis//
you might have balls but your dick stay lifeless//
my flow is pure art,like picasso my rhymes are priceless
you mindless,"K.ill E.nemies W.itness"made you eat your penis//

Okay...
You Didnt Wanna Match
So Its Final, Let The Voting Comence...
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Uppin!
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Vote: Immix

Pretty one sided battle in my opinion, he had the better wordplay and such in his verse, you really need to switch your bar structure though - cause a lot of RB kids wont get it.

Drop A Vote On: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78106

To Save Sleeping. Peace!

Thanks I understand that the herbs of RB wouldnt understand my structure - thank you for telling me, ill work on a new one.

I did drop a comment but I still cannot vote yet, im sorry.

Uppin Still ..