Urban Renascence



A sexy, whats ya name,
Or what up ma;
Those days are done. The revolution is here.
Hello, my name is, whats yours? My interest is poetry, political literature, classy ladies who live nightlife to write a movie on.
What are some of your interest?
The renaissance is alive. Feel the movement.
No more come here bitch. But a seductive-
Excuse me miss, can I occupy your ear for a second?
I saw you around the way and you were too vibrant for me not to approach you.
The urban renascence will not be televised, it is live and in your face.
It is going on right now as we speak!
The renascence consist of African and Latino American who step up to the plate and father their children while supporting their families and contributing to society.
They enrich universities with diversity and culture.
Oh the renascence/revolution is on.
This evolution engulfs women who respect themselves and acknowledge that their precious gift of creation isn’t just a Friday night piece of ass to passed around to every nigga with a 5 inch dick who is holding on to 40 and a 8th grade education and carrying the baggage of his illegitimate child hood in which he has the same bond with his child as his father had with him (absolutely none).
This renascence clings on to Asian Americans who struggles threw life and still are treated as second class Americans. I know what you contribute.
Energy, posse, community service, beauty, intellect, class.
You are right there next to me eating top ramien to survive. I gladly welcome my slanted eyed brothers and sisters.
The revolution is molding today and tomorrow’s political figures, doctors, teachers, priest, and society.
Fasten your seat belt cause this is one ride that you cannot stop.
My people the Urban renaissance is here.

J Nice

nice easy to understand and basically straight out. sweet stuff man keep postin peace

thnx, just trying to express myself

The expression has been found. And you certainly know what you are talking about. But personally, I have yet to see any such revolution in the reality of the world. It sucks, but it'll happen. I'm sure of it.

And top ramen, or any ramen, is the shiznit.

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

WOW........well thought out...beautifully organized witty......and quite original.......reminds me a bit of Necro.....though not as dark...and without the dry sense of humor......thats a good thing....i love the rhetoric and the hopefullness....i agree that no such revolution is here....yet...but who knows? very few people can write open word and have it flow with the delicateness of this piece.........you pulled it off well......great drop.......1

thnx for all the love. If the society could come together and be one like the urban community, we would have peace on earth, and thats real.

iight

nice flow as ppl said, especialy for the way its written

not much to say about it other than what you have already gotten, good piece thou, i'll be looking for some more

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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thanks for the love, I wont stop till the world feels me.

Message...check
badass delivery...check
rythm...check
rhyme...who cares.
I liked this piece overall, but to me it felt more like the notes you make while writing all put together. Just a little more elaboration and reworking and this piece could shine even brighter than it does. THat's just my opinion though.

peace

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