you know the rules from tha other thread

check in

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checkin and spittin

**dinner is served**

I smash this fag quick you can't keep up like a wheel chair drag racin a honda...
better ponder ya chances cuase you gotta worse chance of winning then movies starring Jane Fonda~/~4 lines


warmer

disolate wast i'm merkin a newb shit i give L's are you glad you FOUND me....
tried to clown m but ya names familiar for some reason you were it proudly~/~8lines

i don't need stretched lines to grasp nines(sig) flip it i'm senddin this kids and his jeans down rt 66....
your lines need fixed....you suck dick with CONDUMS cause i can see RUBBER burn on ya LIPS~/~ 12 lines

match this with wits you can't see my level you better look 6 feet up from ya grave~/~
hoop and then rave i'm ROCKIN this bastard with chains cause your now AUDIO SLAVED~/~16

**FINISH IT**

ya stance buckles i'm rippin this kids first glance with a harpoon to his abdomin...
your not lastin man i SMOKE HERBS you don't pocess the glands shit you barely leaving this battle with ya ass in ya hands~/~20LINES


ALL ON YOU

AYO THAT WAS 30 LINES LMAO WHATEVER ITS ALL GOOD FAM............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ....................

hm...................
lost my first verse, dont remember much......let see how it go


Syntext hails from Ohio, his intrests are merkin kids/1
Well this "kids" gonna die yo, finished him 'clean' like detergent is/2

Only Way You Emergin Kid is if You Call me Your Surgeon/3
You need a 'skill transplant' to even 'step to me' cuz ya 'legs' aint werkin/4

I'll Raise this bar, punch you in the face wit it so you taste it hard/5
Cant Erase the scars, lunge wit a pencil and you'll "chase the stars"/6

Only showin elevation with pre-writtins and bitin what u see me spittin/7
Blowin tha collective nation is the only way u gittin 2 measly votes
to splittin/8

Not really worth my time, I throw a wall clock at you knock you out in seconds/9
a dispersed rhyme, ya flow is all shot and few u had few cocks on ya weapon/10

U throw sum Bull shit punches, thas why you follow a whole crowd of herbs in bunches**/11

Eat ma werds like lunches, swollow the beef cold and proud cuz im'a freeze you as ya Rap hunches/12

Now your Wrap's Sunken, by a drunken, if this was a punchline test you'd be flunkin/13
Relax or sumthin sweat you dumpin, it's crunch time i'll carve you like'a pumpkin/14

Pull tha top'a ya hed off to expose the whackness/15
Sure your drop i could'a fed off but your flows slackin/16

Your skill is an evicted scene left barren to tha neck/17
Cuz Drilled this kid in-between his chest & his Larenex/18

Chop off ya fingers to stop you from humiliatin ya self/19
You'll Drop Off Like Singers to block you from simulatin the wealth/20

Just a Poser In The Game and I'll Leave you life-less like a Manikan/21
Bustin Closure for my Name I retrieve ya eye lids you sight-less panicin/22

You couldn't win if you was a "shoe-in",/23
you chasin ya skill but then what the fuck is you persuin?/24

Goin Over Tha Line Limit like its Allowed,/25
I'm Glowin Over ya Mind's Gimmick you Just a Shroud/26
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**(running of the bulls..<they shit alot during, so u pick up herbs shit)

wtf?======================
Going for the newb on this one!

"Pull tha top'a ya hed off to expose the whackness/15
Sure your drop i could'a fed off but your flows slackin/16"

Fuckin classic,
Maybe slackness would of worked better than slackin w/e

Vote=EyE4NeYe
And if either of you want to take me on, I'm free now! pm me

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Break down:

Punches........E4E
Personals: Syntext
Wordplay: Tie
Multies: e4e
Flow: tie

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I cant vote yet ...
But I can leave feedback,
Syntext how the fuck do
you say you did 30 lines
Im totally lost with that
but your verse was okay...

E4e not bad, lose the ( " " )
and your verse will be alot
better...

Cheak this out!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79681

Yeah, this was a close battle right here, but I have to give the vote to the NEWB.

Breakdown:

Flow: both
Punches: eye
Wordplay: both

eye barely took this one, no hate or dr, but the vote goes to eye.

Good shit from both, keep droppin.

aight it was a tight battle but eye pulled out on his wordplay vocab and his punchs but he wasnt much better than syn props to both vote eye