10 lines...spit soon

TRy me and get Left BEHIND im serious~
but unlike this fag i dont bring past fudgepaccin expeirience~
U leavin this trail of whackness so herbs can track this~
i heard u key quick but y brin that to ya sexual tactics~
Look at ya skin color, you too blind to see tho~
ill leave you feelin violated like odb's PO~
All the verse you spit together, ya gunn need more~
If i keep readin ya shyt ima have to ivent the PILLOW keyboard~
Come on nigga tell evry1 wats unda da girdle~
how this square gunn fit in the winners circle~
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last..
On ya knees, subjected to read da battle, all of da above~
Skill? you couldnt cath talent if u typed wit gloves~

iight now u ..since u like to talk shyt..match me
ghozt

ur lines are garbage, u cant even draw a neat kitten |
either ur frees are bitten or newport's addicted to pre-writtens |
ur a joke, I hate to see ur smoked like the lungs of hippies |
give this cunt whiskey to prove he's pussy, then gun his kidneys |
I've sonned this fake, he's a carbon box so I'll literally crush his fate |
like 2 funeral churches, he re-hearses his verses thats why he's never a-wake |
newport put's the lamp on but still cant think brightly, I think it might be |<-his sig
this light pea can never Do The Right Thing like Spike Lee! |
false rumors goin around that u ill, u pray n hope its true |
before im done, im'ma glue ur verse to ur face so now..the jokes on you! |

Gotta say both of you came out alright. I liked both verses alot. I think alot more of this skill will elevate you both...I felt BIO came alot harder. Had better structure and better flow. I do have to say BIOs last line was chronic i felt that and it made me laugh..

vote =BIO

you vote on our battle cause its getting slept on...

link = http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

Byo Took This...Overall Better Verse.Stronger Punches,A Bit Better Wordplay And Some Complexity Too

Tight Sig Byo...Mines Is Still Better

Vote-Byo

Bio had Better Flow...(ryme scheme)...Better Punches Too..
Newport, your Verse Sounded Kinda Simple..
Punches werent that Good Either in My opinion..

Bio had Punches that STOOD OUT, and Ports didnt..

POLL vote-Bio..



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