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09-17-03, 07:39 AM
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my first song
IP: 65A8 A5EA
sup yall
im 16 years old and live in Autralia and have just produced my first demo song, hope yall like it and would like sum positive feedbax. peace out. www.soundclick.com/nishal Last edited by nishal : 09-17-03 at 07:43 AM. |
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09-17-03, 11:54 AM
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IP: 5319 6F6E
you need to work on the production cause its really poor quality. Work on ya voice too, you need to put sum energy and emotion into your music..work on ya flow and structure too, you went off beat at times and your lyrics needs some major improvement.
other than dat.. keep rappin and u'll get better one |
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