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lyrical disaster 0 0%
R-Dot-Capone 2 100.00%
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Old 09-17-03, 01:50 AM   #1
R-Dot-Capone
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From: Brooklyn, NY
lyrical disaster vs. R-Dot-Capone

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u made the rules....
good luck......
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Old 09-17-03, 02:07 AM   #2
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aiight...
beatin me is like a midget doin a dunk/
or u shootin at me wit a capgun - when im a bullet proof monk/
i define ill, the only way ur ill is by catchin a cold/
ive seen ur punches, they suk, so ill jus put em on hold/
when i called out 4 a battle, u were intimidated, like do or die/
ur rhymes are well below average- u should submit at least 2 replies/
as u can see below, ive been spitten fire since birth/
i chose to go first- but i guess i just wasted a whole verse/
u think ur sik(good rapper) but u got genitle herpes/
then ya mum joins in and sucks it up like slurpees/
choosen to battle a newbe proves ur insane, or u got no game/
i stroll away, leavin ur head on the curb of memory lane/
i dunno why u call yaself R-DOT-CAPONE/
i leave u hangin from a string in the roof in front of ya family or on ya own...



spit soon man, good luk, PCe
 
Old 09-17-03, 02:09 AM   #3
R-Dot-Capone
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aight.......
i'll spit in a bit..............
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Old 09-17-03, 02:27 AM   #4
R-Dot-Capone
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Ur style's wack. Kid u couldn't beat me with a bat/
I laugh while i attack that silly verse u call a rap/
U really think ur better than me? R's a lyrical messiah/
And i observed ur delivery's shitty like a fertilizer truck driver/
I'm not trying. My weakest is better than anything u might do/
U rapping is pointless like seatbelts on a motorcycle/
I'm adding 2 my record... There's no way that u can beat this/
Spitting fire since birth? That's cuz i busted in ur mouth as a fetus/
Boy i can rip u limb from limb verbally/
This whole idea of u thinking u can win is just absurd 2 me/
Lyrical Disaster? Well the name fits u perfect/
The only nice bust u would have if Smiley faces came out ur dick when u jerked it/
I'm through embarrassing u. We know the outcome of this story/
PM me the last 2 bars. I'll let u write them 4 me/
Let's bring in the votes. It's obvious i murdered this bitch/
It's like i broke ur back, now let's see u stand up 2 the kid/
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Old 09-17-03, 02:28 AM   #5
R-Dot-Capone
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not my best work but oh well.............
let's get some votes................
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Old 09-17-03, 02:39 AM   #6
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AiGhT....


cApOne's Verse had Better Punches..They Stood OUT more.
The Ryme Scheme was Much Better too..the Flow..

I'm adding 2 my record... There's no way that u can beat this/
Spitting fire since birth? That's cuz i busted in ur mouth as a fetus/


^^Tha was your Best Line in my OpinioN...

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Lyrical..Your verse was Ok too..But your Flow was Weak..
The Punches were Ok but they Could Have been Worded Better..


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Old 09-17-03, 02:46 AM   #7
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I'm adding 2 my record... There's no way that u can beat this/
Spitting fire since birth? That's cuz i busted in ur mouth as a fetus/

yeah this wass a good line

Ima give it to capone because he took it with bettre punches but only narroly

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Old 09-27-03, 01:48 AM   #8
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uppin..............................
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Old 09-27-03, 01:49 AM   #9
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I'll hit this up later.
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Old 09-27-03, 01:58 AM   #10
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r dot capone got this all the way..he was on a whole different level than disaster..diaster's verse was kind of like...ummm..shit..no of like shit..no offense..r dot was spittin like a vet compared to him..

can someone hit up the battle in my sig..thanks..
 
Old 09-27-03, 02:04 AM   #11
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^^Yea i agree r dot took this with ease.But it was a weak battle both ya'll need to elavate.
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Old 09-27-03, 04:32 AM   #12
Menik
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This was a pretty good battle, but Capone took this with harder punches and he had better flow i thought, i was feeling his verse more too, so my vote goes to Capone
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