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Old 09-30-03, 05:19 PM   #16
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shit was ok.... but um if you write it before u hear the beat DONT just rap what u wrote. EDIT it to fit the beat naw mean.... ok stay uip.. now make a SONG that i can nodd my head to... fuck a diss.
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Old 09-30-03, 07:38 PM   #17
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nice diss.......you got flows son.......


i dont know who u dissin but that was straight....best cut i peeped here today but i only been threw a couple so far

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Old 09-30-03, 08:12 PM   #18
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chrit got ripped....the thesis and jesus line was tyte tho...good shit
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Old 09-30-03, 09:09 PM   #19
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Old 09-30-03, 11:28 PM   #20
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Ahhh. . it was sort of whack. You was off-beat badly. Missed the snare every 2 bars. I mean I write without the beat sometimes too. . but it doesn't take but a couple minutes to fix it to fit. That is no excuse. Delivery could use work but it seemed delivery and emotion was your best suit. Lyrics were average. A lot of filler and some played shit.

I expected better. . . blah.
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Old 10-01-03, 12:24 AM   #21
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lol i was feelin it. made some good points
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Old 10-01-03, 12:58 AM   #22
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are you faggots on crack, wtf are you talking about "missed the snare", like every bar in a rap track has to match every drum hit and snare perfectly? that beat has alot of switchups, some bars are longer than others when its switching.

and like I said for the billionth time, I did this shit for fun, I didnt spend time on the shit, I could care less if it isnt the perfect track. I got more important shit to do than waste my time perfecting a diss track about some bitch made textcee that is never going to reply back with anything but a dumb ass text comment (and maybe a nail biting open mic piece!).
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Old 10-01-03, 01:24 AM   #23
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its spelled Chrit.......
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Old 10-01-03, 04:08 AM   #24
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^That just tore this diss to pieces. LMMFAO
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Old 10-01-03, 12:16 PM   #25
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^That just tore this diss to pieces. LMMFAO



NO IT DIDENT
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Old 10-02-03, 01:38 AM   #26
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shit I like this... and agree!
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Old 10-02-03, 01:42 AM   #27
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you wasted your time dissing textcees without microphones...


honestly... there just gonna come in here with there friends and talk shit...

the fact taht you have somewhat a sense of rhythm places you higher then them in my eyes...
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Old 10-02-03, 04:31 AM   #28
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you wasted your time dissing textcees without microphones...


honestly... there just gonna come in here with there friends and talk shit...

the fact taht you have somewhat a sense of rhythm places you higher then them in my eyes...


yeah and because I said you're the only head thats worth a listen!
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Old 10-02-03, 12:31 PM   #29
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yeah and because I said you're the only head thats worth a listen!



DONT FORGET NONEEDZ WTF KID SHIT BTICH WJHDAJDSALKD:LQK!JK@!K!
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Old 10-02-03, 11:32 PM   #30
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"blah blah blah"

That's all I read from your reply after you started making MORE excuses. Face it kid you fuckin suck. Just go away. This shit wasn't worth my time listening to. And no I'm not just another textcee. I do audio as well so I know what I'm talking about. You have a flow like Master Blaster. Now leave. Thank you come again.
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