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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
The Aftermath | 5 | 100.00% | |
M.A.W. | 0 | 0% | |
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10-07-03, 05:03 PM | #16 | |
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MAW your verse was whack ass hell.Aftermath edged with disses,
personals and punches.There was no complexity in this battle or creativity.So my words tto ya'll are "get better". Vote=Aftermath ^^ I agree with Cerebral MAW your verse was mad weak and this newbie stole the victory with some weak punches BEST LINE - Yo, if you wanna battle now, spit something decent up next/ I'll still stomp ya shit, whether its cypher, audio or text/ But both of you's need to work on it peep my battle with LUNGS ~1~ |
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10-08-03, 08:49 AM | #17 | |
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Man...what is it up to? do only poll votes count as well cos ppl aint poll votin....
Still uppin anyway |
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10-08-03, 09:59 AM | #18 | |
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*Steps in Frontlines for the first in a few weeks......... lmao*
Ok this was weak.....both of u , ....but aftermath took this, cuz he had some better punches, ...vocab was weak on both sides, ...u need both elevation.... Vote = Aftermath
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10-08-03, 10:06 AM | #19 | |
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punches-aftermath personals-both(not many) overall-aftermath http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83083 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=severe+lyrics ^^can I get some fair votes on them^^ |
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10-08-03, 11:02 AM | #20 |
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Flow = Aftermath
Punches = Aftermath Personals = Aftermath Wordplay = Aftermath Originality = NEITHER (leave the fukkn 'mum' lines alone kids!) Overall = **Aftermath**
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10-08-03, 11:58 AM | #21 | |
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Yo that verse was wack but it was literally a 2 min keystyle.
i usually battle at ionic.instanceart.org/forum - lyricist lounge (sorry if u can't put addresses but edit that out rather then my post plz man)peep this verse i posted last night vs Catastrophe and give me some feedback. Verse Man....I know this kid aint no herb but he's still gonna bleed/ Rip this fool outta the floor... fuck a herb, this kids a weed/ Put lyrical in front of ya name and you've a pretty good description/ If you ever pen a rhymebook, it'll be wack....that's Non Fiction/ One look at my rhymes got you rubbing ya eyes in disbelief/ Refreshing ya page won't make it any less tight chief/ I'mma torch-a you son, burning ya skin to first degree/ But i guess you're used to the sensation since contracting V.D/ Ya crew ain't menaces to society, just boyz in the hood, baby boy/ I'm comin straight for ya jugular like you was Siegfried and Roy/ Swift Xecutionas....your group of fools will never last/ Just like ya boy Divinci, it seems you're livin in the past/ Punk....I'll properly, possibly, punish ya verse philisophically/ Cos 'you've achieved a degree that precedes all wack emcees' probably/ You aint a real dog....you're just undercover like Tim Roth/ A professional choke artist, while others spit you just cough/ Cats Attackin The Aftermath, Shit...This Rookies Only Postponing His Elevation/ Workin all night on ya rhyme, suffering from sleep deprivation/ And still ya vocab and wordplay are below average, you can't match me/ I'll murder you over n over like Itchy does Scratchy/ Cos ya shits played n more repetitive than reality t.v/ Ya ratings gonna drop without an originality c.v/ This fools a Village People fan, a real homosexual bigot/ Either that or theres some village thats missing its idiot/ You need a fuckin miracle but i'm the saviour from up above/ I make you a black eyed g, n you still ask me where's the love?/ Wack rappers are an endangered species, since the penalties capital punishment/ This herbs the opposite of Pun, seriously lacking lyrical nourishment/ Peace __________________ |
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10-08-03, 01:45 PM | #22 |
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THIS WA SSET UP WRONG
MAKE ANOTHER THREAD & RE-POST YA VERSES MAKE IT RIGHT!!! -BROOKLYN |
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