okay like you said usual rules...and since I'm bored..I will go first....10-20 lines..all votes must be explained..none of that.."do I really have to explain"..bullshit..aight..

I might key this up..okay..here we go..

Mad cause he bout to take in more than he can dish/
Bitch,'4 leaf clovers' couldnt grant your 'Wish'/
Thats why I got you scared as fuck,look at yo face/
You just 'half bitch,half gay' like 'Will and Grace'/
Murdered the dictionary,fuck it,pictionary lets begin/
See look RUSH----->WINIm rushin for the win/
Fuck punches,I got bars that disturb the dead/
Cut off yo 'skull,make you pass it'..to say you give head'/
'Grabbin my dick' when 'I urinate',so you can 'get me pissed'/
You want this battle?..just put it on your Christmas wish list/

You fags think I'm done?

Lessons of rap.....this is step one dog/
Females like Wish.....drop 'purse on all'(personal)/
Bars and lines will shock and shake yo body/
Cause I got 'punches' like 'judo and karate'/


damn..I'm stomped..lol..cant think of nothin else..well.yo turn to drop..

This Is My First Ever Battle ....


This my first battle...already your been fucked out-of-place...
That verse was shit..it wasnt anything but a copy-and-paste..

You think you can win this..using thoes weak metaphor's..
Well read this verse bitch...you'lll ask me to murk-you-some-more..

This battle is like a staring contest.. theres no way im gunna blink...
Dont cry kid...I have skill while your like my trash can..plain stink...

You should call me a car booster they way im lifting this show..
While you need drastik measurez...to gain some wins, hoe..

Your verse was slow..like you were cruising at a low-speed..
You wish that you were me...Why?.. cause im what the hoes-need..

You think you got this win ...So you wanna celebrate..
But thats alrite...at least I dont have to find my dick to masturbate..

I dont give a fuck about you..thats why your being out-played..
I'll leave my rhymes ringing in your head till you fall down-n-decay..

This shits a waste of my time..so im gunna quit..after you get ripped-quick..
Your punches just didnt hit..similar to your dick that feels-no-clit..

good first battle wish. but i gotta give it to flyweight. very very creative punches. good shit man. best line: Thats why I got you scared as fuck,look at yo face/
You just 'half bitch,half gay' like 'Will and Grace'/
and!!!!...
Fuck punches,I got bars that disturb the dead/
Cut off yo 'skull,make you pass it'..to say you give head'/

nice job guys. hit up my battle....
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=84152

whos flyweight?????

anyway..

flow-wish
punches-rush
originality-rush
wordplay-rush
enjoyment-rush

vote-rush...good shit by both

i got adrenaline on this he had a better flow and more wittier disses. wish had a couple ok disses i liked one line the other were just average disses, flow culd of been better too. vote rush

ya'll hit my battles up in my sig check my battle with enhance first one on there. thanx soon as i get 100 posts i'll be polling sorry.

peace out

punches-rush
originality-rush
wordplay-rush
flow-wish
overall-rush

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83083
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=severe+lyrics
^^can I get some fair votes on them^^

[B]Flow = Rush

Punches = Rush

"Fuck punches,I got bars that disturb the dead/
Cut off yo 'skull,make you pass it'..to say you give head'/"

Meta4s = Wish

Originality = Rush (by a nut hair)

Wordplay = Rush

Name flips = Neither

Personals = Neither

Overall = **Rush**

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i think wish got this for a newbie. longer then other guys. not too bad either just the rite way for structure. and just better overall........................................... ...........................
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vote= wish

I have to go wit Rush for a better overall verse and harder disses

the other dude needs a bit more work,

an okay battle tho

Vote = Rush

this was a close battle, but rush took it on origionality, finisher, structure, and vocab. but you gotta elevate cause the newbie almost had you. peace............... my vote-rush...................
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what the fuck?..something smells fishy in this battle and it is not your pussy as vote real mc..I got to get that vote checked out..

.| wish came more consistint in this |.
.| i thought rush had the harder of the punches |.
.| but came weak at times....but i feel barely |.

vote-rush

drop a fair one:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=84352

cast your vote on the poll^^^.then I will hit your battle up..

hey..Im not to sure..but I think this is my hundredth post!!1..yay!!!..hip hip hooray..anyway..everyone cast your votes then I will hit yall battle up..