The Life Lived, Story Told.

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The Ammounts Of Single-Parent Kids Keeps Increasin,
But America, Aint Supportin,....Only Sperm's Releasing.
SocialWorkers,To Prevent U From A Public Hummiliation,
Its Just Another 'Pit' Of Lies, Within The Information,
Stared At, By HighHeaded People,By Use Of Notoriety,
Bein Treated Like Left-Overs,The Weed Of Society,
Helpin Hands, Thinkin They Help,'Perfectly' Arranged,
But The Inside Structurally,Still Remains Un-Changed.
Drug Addicted,In Search Of Cure,Quoted From A Dictionary,
Maybe These People Shud Jus Be Respected,For Bein Extraordinary.

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Divided Passions, Relaxed Actions, The Evil In People
Justifying My Thoughts, In Search of My Own Equal
The Problems, Solutions, And Other Stories We Tellin
Even As I Speak Now, The World Commits A New Felon
The Way I Present Thoughts, With Crime And Suspense
Problems Linked To Each Other, And We Can't Comprehend
We Know Our True Goal, If God's Message Has Reached Us
But We Are The Death Of Our Own Future, Aborting a Fetus
My Mind Searched For A Way, A Familiar Route That I Saw
I'm Looking For Answers, And Into The Darkness I Called
The Problems, It Seems, Predicting Mans Final Flaw
When Problems Meet Each Other With Prejudice And All
If You Can Understand, How Easy God Can Take Us Away
Tomorrow Might Not Be In The Contract, And So I Pray
The Life That I Lead, And The Story I Am Tellin
Is For The Future, But The Present, Deletes All Remembrance
Of What Discoveries, Are made, Jealousy Fuels Our Rage
New Discoveries Thrown Inside And Locked In A Cage
Jealousy Is Our Downfall, Killing The man With The Cure For AIDS
When A Person Found The Plant, Envy Soon Sent Both To Graves
We Refuse To Change Society, And It marks How We Livin
When An Idea Is Introduced, It's Stupid, And Both go to Prison
The Life that We Live, Parrallel To The Story We Are Tellin
Look AT Society and Future, The Money Countries Are Spendin
In Help Of Themselves, Lies Is What Is Fuelin Their Seed
We Don't Get ANy Help, But Look What Others Recieve
Bombs And Missiles, Lies, You Know Our Shoulder Is Cold
America Was Once To The People, TO the Devil It's Sold
I Compare My COuntry To An Irresponsible Father
If We All Die Anyways, Why Do We Live Or Just Bother

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Going To School Is Seen a hassle and its done so casual,
I Wear Uniform With Steeze And Reform How People Sees.
Me..< Yes Just Those Two Letters Sums Up Potent In One,
Doesn't Seem Enough Like All The Opponents I've Done.
Components Sons!< Gettin My Dick Out At Every Chance,
Involvment Of My Stance Is More Prominent Than Implants
Whether they chant or glance at me< thats all im thinking
I'm so self concious that this can't actually be called living
I've been given a curse at birth< That isn't just me lieing
I stand up on my own two feet with my testicles complying
In me surving.. Need more lines to show you the real me
Feel me? I DON'T GIVE A FUCK




Because The Lord Chose Us For Life, To Change Earth In Some Way
The Life that We Live, The Story Is Told, Ending In All Vain

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Dopeness, Good SHit Guys, Commments Please?

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Only God can judge me, Who THE FUCK IS YOU?!

:.S.Dot.KiddZ


HAd long ass verse...lol But it was Sick Collabo no doubt Keep up the good work

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Damn...Nice Collab Rite Here..

All Came Nice..

Skiddz Had A Long Ass Verse But It Flowed Good And Vocab And Shit Was Good..

Both Potent And TDC Came Equally As Good..Flow Was Good...All 3 Kept Well On Topic..

Good Shit..

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nice.. absolutely perfect collab. pure ill. nice vocab to all and wordplay with flow all the same hey return the favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4487#post834487

there is not much to say here cuz this shit was dope. i was really feelin the first verse but the whole rhyme was hard. big ups my niggas.

holla at yo boi
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Uppin, I Know My Verse is Long, because It Was Supposed To Be My Own Open Mic, But Then We Decided to Make It A Collab

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that was a tight ass collab, the flow was on target throughout the post, the vocab and wordplay were pretty good, the content and topic were original, overall id say it was a 8-8.5/10. good shit u guys.

yo if u have the time can u hit this up wit an honest vote?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84864
itd be much appreciated.

peace.......

when G's talk about tight collab that shit is what they be talkin about, that was definitly ill, also nice vocab and wordplay

that was a great collab
you should do another
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