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10-15-03, 03:20 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Zoom In On The Lense
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Just a short keystlye. I figured I might as well do something thats worth someone's time while I'm visiting the site.
Zoom in on the lense, focus on the future and as the clock bends, Father Time becomes a moocher Takin' up all your minutes, he doesn't want you with Mother Earth but time only exists in your mind, you decide what reality's worth Search, within your soul, and try to find your deeper meaning don't look at yourself as a whole, 'cause out of it your aura's bleeding You find your hair receeding, fading away just like your mind while your vision and reality fades too, leaving yourself blind Don't be confined by your body, let your soul fly free I been doin' it for years, before I became an emcee what's emcee mean to me? I look into the mirror to find out but when I look at my reflection, it's not myself that comes back out It makes me shout, scream, terrifies me to death hyperventilation, trouble takin' in a single breath |
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10-15-03, 10:08 AM | #2 | ||||||
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come on i know everyone wants to read this, so quit sleeping
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10-15-03, 10:36 AM | #3 | ||||||
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yo twin fuck them this shit was on point...........
you have a lyricists talent in a poetic mind that is a gift twin do you |
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10-15-03, 12:35 PM | #4 | ||||||
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yea fo real this was some real good shit dawg the vocab and wordplay and agh it was all good the flow was tight and this shit was real poetic.. good shit dawg
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10-15-03, 11:12 PM | #5 | ||||||
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^^^thx 4 the feedback... anyone else?
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10-15-03, 11:15 PM | #6 | |||||||
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u got sum skillz
work on better wordplay u got sum potenitol tho kid keep i t ocmin |
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10-16-03, 02:33 AM | #7 | ||||||
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well thanks... im glad you think i have potential
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10-16-03, 02:39 AM | #8 | ||||||
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LOL^^^hes probably better than U
anyways i liked this i reckon u had good flow...im not sure the heading suites the verse i liked this line what's emcee mean to me? I look into the mirror to find out but when I look at my reflection, it's not myself that comes back out ^^that was nice......anyways overall it was a good drop and i hope to see more out u Pz
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10-19-03, 08:46 PM | #9 | ||||||
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^^^shep... this was me... he isnt better dawg lol... unless you think so
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