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10-23-03, 07:50 AM | #1 | ||||||
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Fallen Up Feat. Hypnotik, Status Qu0, Liquid Flame & Netcee
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Bottom's Up. .
Swarmed with Lust for an insight into the lives of the Fallen Up. Optimism Ruined & Bruised, Accident Prone as I Stall And Such Its The Truth. . Life's a Race Against Time we All Inevitably Lose Facing Notions of the Darkness, Overpowered shadowless youth The feeling of Being Lonely, then Drownin in Waves of Emotions What Remains is a Pyre of Burnt Hope & I Learned to Cope With Shackled and Chained, now Wrapped in the Flames of my Desire Heart Trapped in a Cage, Racking my Brain in attempts to Aspire Broadcast as Lame, with little more than Ink & Tattered Remains Settling Scores with Mother Nature as Fate cruely Traps my Pace Repress luck, Caressed n touched by the silent Breath of the Lord Constantly strugglin against the norm, I stay encased in the storm struggling against the winds, fighting the breathlessness address the kids, trying to get them out of the orphanage i kick n fight, live the night so i could wish to die while the sun teases the ground in the distant sky i maniuplate eyes, with trickery talking to the deaf who stare, intent on listening rubble and soil begin to bubble and boil trapping me in a cage, the subtlest toil unravelling the snakes that dont wanna uncoil their plans are foiled, standing on shaky grounds silence begins making sounds that awaken crowds and they trample each other while jumping down i see the thunder and hear the lightning now the sound is immaculate and my ears are bleedin secrets haunt me and i've commited treason betraying anything decent so I begin to fall up towards the demons Tossed and turned, Dropped and burned, The dove is freeborn.. I've written it, I'm a hypocrite..Now I'm being lifted above and beyond.. Whether I behaved or not, I'm going to be a slave to God.. Listen to what I'm sayin, Don't saunter to Satan.. I sit at the alter praying, hoping they don't falter or decay man.. Trying to save faces from jails and the cages.. Free you from a similar fate, My writs blister pages.. I write with abound skills and hope the sound will.. I frown still as everything runs away downhill.. I give and strive for everything big and trife.. I'm not a sinner right, I just try and live the life.. But believe me Christ, all is wrong when living right Weaving through life, screaming through meaningless plight Heeding the light…some say it guides us to green pastures But I bet three pennies the devil can get there faster And I’d even bet a dollar that god’ll turn his back On any living creature, man woman or rat.. So while walking on land searching for footprints It’s normal To see a thousand eyes staring at you clueless But if you just, take a seat, rest…lay back and ponder Your mind’ll get lost and your thoughts ‘ ll wonder Into deep dark spaces never known to man idea’s become unlocked…as knowledge begins to expand reality becomes clear, time seems to stop Then you wake up and the vision is blackened by ink blots sticks & stones break your bones but words break apart. Staying away from swarms, with the stake to my heart, I convert thoughts to script, straying away from the norm. Like the frost copes, with heat by changing it's form, but two fingers in the air become peace with lost quotes. Island clerics, self-sustaining machines of false hope, what were once royally cherished are now silent peasants. But time is of the essence, with it's own grimy presence, |
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10-23-03, 07:53 AM | #2 | |||||||
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i wrote this about 2 years ago want some feed back hook me up
title: fuck wit dis verse 1: yo dog i aint ya average cracka/im mad wacka, bitch smacka, mc attacka/u just a sacka, bullshit, u pullshit, but aint nuttin wurk/ima drive u bizerk, i luv how ya twerk/ima fuckin jerk, my views r inconcievealbe/my flowz is unbeliveable, i recieve a full, blown attack/then respond right tha fuck back/ppl call me a wannabe, but i wanna see, n e muthafucka that can do dis betta/ya kno, spit flowz that r wetta/ya see, ima go getta, if i have 2, ill tear u up like papper thru a shredda// my flowz is so wet when i spit u need a poncho/ill do anything to prove im tha head honco/ill crack whips, shut htem lips, i bust enuff clips, 2 sink crusie ships, floatin on tha ocean/shit once tha rhymes is in motion, i create a magic potion/an evil spell like hocus pocus, when this happends u cant focus/its hopeless, and thats y im tha dopest/ chorus: x2 yall dont wanna fuck wit dis, yall dont wanna fuck wit dis, yall dont wanna fuck wit dis, i wouldnt want to fuck wit dis/ verse 2: when i write raps, its like an evil guiness schemin, i jus strait unleash my inner demon/ now u at knife point screamin/wanna b as ill as me? shit fool, keep dreamin/u cant fuck wit dis like a bitch wit dick long hard an fulla semen/like a fuckin submerine, ahoy captian, down parascope/look thru and thers tha dope, mc who bears tha rope/4 which u gon b strangled, leave ur ass dangled/inside my web u now entangled, jus waitin 2 get mangled/and now matta wat, only one of us is gon be under ground six feet/u r wat u eat, if thats true, then ima pussy/go ahead and push me, ill strait beat ya ass til ya mushy/im comin at cha fasta than a stampedin herd a bison/trample ya, now it looks like ya ass wuz whooped my tyson/im slicin and dicin, cut u again once or twice and/a third time 4 tha fuck it cuz u wont mind ya own damn bizness/wat is this? original, so ho dont even try 2 fuckin copy this, unless u want 2 get beat down again wit hockey sticks/im one of them cocky dicks, makin ya sweat, cuz ur flows sloppy bitch/ chorus verse 3: ima crush ur pansy ass like a can of aluminium/ and wat about ya crew and them? ima strait put two in'em, and ya bitches? yea im screwin'em/doin'em, in jacuzzius, makin movies, get done then go wit my boys up tha club bustin uzis/bang bang bitch, im ya kryptonite/2 godamn quick 2 fight, if ya follow tha script jus right/ull find out i come fully equiped 2nite/2 put u in a crypt, aiight? dont need no reason im jus strait colda than tha artic/im always tha one 2 start shit, jack everything u own and sell it own tha black market/in my spare time i get higher than a magic carpet/and spit flowz that be tighta than a snake grip/honestly dog, im gettin sicka ya fake shit, its funny cuz at tha same time u also cant seem to take it/tha fact that in reality aint kno on earth can bust this, censership cops hand cuff this, i can see y aint kno one can trust this/this aint poetic justice, its just this/say wat? state a tha art like tha second playstation/moldin faggots like ya self like claymation, calculate it and end up fulla frustration/u cant erase it, face it, 4 dis there just aint no imatation/biotch chorus |
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10-23-03, 07:54 AM | #3 | |||||||
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i just wrote this shiot about an hour ago waiting on peeps to vote on my shit pretty gay but give me feedback
Chorus: 2x (Sammy) someone find a camera shoot this hardcore porn/ XXX is bein reborn, this type of shit is a sure delight/ its out of sight, when bitches are bein fucked just right/ Verse 1: (Raymond) Yo im huffin paint thinner// gettin higher by the minute// yo bitch i got a paper bag, guess whats in it// vodka, condems, and a thong// so lets go ahead get it on/ you can cut the tension wit a knife// thats why i fucked your wife// but as for sister bitch// just like ludicris// i wanna lick ya from your head to yo ur toe/ oh no, i dont give a fuck if your a hoe// in fact i dont care much for relationships/ i just wanna put my hands on your hips// and gently touch your soft lips// but i dont mean the ones on your face// we can fuck here or in a public palce// or in the back of a rental Taurus// or in the mutha fuckin forrest// the bottom line is ima eat you like a spineosaurus// shut up bitch just listen to the chorus// chorus: 2x (Sammy) someone find a camera shoot this hardcore porn/ XXX is bein reborn, this type of shit is a sure delight/ its out of sight, when bitches are bein fucked just right/ verse 2: (Raymond) oh yeah picture this two bitches having sex/ I’m talking hardcore triple x/ They be fucking lesbian lovers// Touching and rubbing on each other/ Licking each others clits// Sucking each others tits// Hell nah, they don’t fucking like dicks// This be the only way they get there kicks// Oh damn, another bitch walks in, then goes on and joins them// count'em// 1-2-3 that’s a muh fucking threesome// no man can please'em// They all love the taste of pussy// Whether bald or bushy// ha ha the bitch spreads her legs open// and she mother fucking hoping// her friend has a hurricane tongue// she must cuz shes screamin at the top of her lungs// god damn, it sounds like shes havin fun// but let me tell you, she aint the only one// something emerging in a sweet innocent virgin / the last bitch is gettin the feel of vibrations// and she cant help but maon and groan, to her sexual sensations// there really aint no fuckin limitations// to these bitches imaginations// but its no trouble 4 me to get them hoes numbers// shit im the reason, lesbians throws out there cucumbers/ chorus: 2x (sammy) someone find a camera shoot this hardcore porn/ XXX is bein reborn, this type of shit is a sure delight/ its out of sight, when bitches are bein fucked just right/ verse 3: in case you havent noticed, i aint nuttin but a pervert// red alert, red alert i began to fuckin flirt// but all i really wanna do is get up your skirt// cuz to me pussy's just another dessert// i make it fuckin hurt// til i began to fuckin squirt// ha ha i always make sure to pull out// shit thats what tha fuck im all about// that and makin the bitch scream and shout// all my other ships have sailed// all i wanna do is get drunk and get nailed// wont quit til your fuckin pussy's impailed// my train’s derailed/ a nuclear explosion// mutha fuckin causin erotion// next time ill use a Trojan// nuttin beats latex when it comes to sex// except silicon// now im in that killa zone// to all the bitches hoes and sluts out there// beware// ima guy ya dont wanna miss/ just remember this// when you sit back and reminesis// bout the good ol' times// when you heard my rhymes// and i left you in stitches// i aint got the riches// but still i fuck the bitches// oh shit my dick itches// i guess i got an STD// damn it fuckin sucks to be me// talk: these r the spoken words of the sons of a bitch werd^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ |
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10-23-03, 07:56 AM | #4 | ||||||
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lmfao
why are both styles no where near the same? biter. die. |
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10-23-03, 08:00 AM | #5 | |||||||
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and i wrote this shit to my girl damn i really do love her * my pimpin days r done lol o well u would quick 2
verse 1: yo, mommy, i wanna be wit chu for tha rest of my days/ tha thought of us not together shoots a pain thru my legs/ i cant breathe, then i see ur picture, im dazed/ and all of a sudden i become obsessed and amazed/ wit cha beauty, and girl u posses me wit them green eyes/ ya whole life ya been around and out wit alotta mean guys/ now u want to be with me why?/ cause u can tell the difference between lies/ and fibs, my ribs, is too small to contain my heart/ if u ever leave ill wonder y and it’ll tear me apart/ i already feel tha pain of darts/ and tha rain will start/ and go on and on, long and strong, till dawn is gone, piercein my skin, within sin, i grin, yo body is so fine/ u could b a porn star, now i bet ur thinkin "oh god, he is so blind"/ chorus: she's tha perfect gurl for me, and she's tha gurl of my dreams/ gurl of my dreams yall, she's tha gurl of dreams/ Verse 2: Now yo, mommy, a lot of guys like pimps and playas would degrade and Rush 2 diss u/ But shit, girl, that ain’t why I’m here, I’m here to talk, I ain’t afraid to touch the issues/ If u left me, do u got n e idea how much i missed u? / Do you have any idea how far id go just to kiss you?/ Together we must trust in us, don’t blush, I wish u/ Would tell me what to do to make your life better/ I’d buy u any thing, a house, a car, a dog, or even a nice sweeter/ Which do u prefer, gold, or do u like ice better?/ shit, your my baby, id buy u the world/ and u know me, id never purposely lie 2 a girl/ this shit right here wasn’t intended to make u howl/ if it did I’m sorry, take this towel, when u speak I hold on to every sacred vowel/ cause everything u say, everything u do, everything u stand for// I deeply adore// And stops me from doin something foolish// when people ask me what perfection is, I say my one true love, Justine Lee Pierce to the fullest// yo chorus: she's tha perfect gurl for me, and she's tha gurl of my dreams/ gurl of my dreams yall, she's tha gurl of dreams/ VERSE 3: Yo Justine the first 2 verses explained how much I truly care// But now let me tell every 1 about that time in my bed we shared// Shit we talked, moaned, and had the best times, in my silk bed// That memory has yet to leave my head// It was an experience I will always remember// An early b-day present for the 13th day of December// We’re the freakiest, freaks I know// Just cause the other bitches say it doesn’t mean ur a hoe// We both know, that isn’t true// They are just jealous, they don’t have me, like you do// I can’t wait till we again lay naked under the silk cover// That’ll gives me a feeling like no other// 1 day if I can have kids I want u to be there mother// Well have lil rappers and strippers running around causing commotion// We’re together now, so there is no more wishing and hoping// chorus: she's tha perfect gurl for me, and she's tha gurl of my dreams/ gurl of my dreams yall, she's tha gurl of dreams/ |
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10-23-03, 08:03 AM | #6 | ||||||||
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are you fucking dumb i told you i wrote that 1 like 2 years ago dumb ass read and then talk shit fucking herb |
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10-23-03, 08:07 AM | #7 | |||||||
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shit man my bad i posted these on your shit instead of there own thread my-b srry dude but still ur a herb lol ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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10-23-03, 08:13 AM | #8 | ||||||
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lmao
its arrite bro, i was just fucking around to stop you posting your pieces in here! lmao ive got 7 replies and no feedback thus far mind replying now you've spammed my thread?! = ) |
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10-27-03, 06:37 AM | #9 | ||||||
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motherfuckers, coime on - this gets NO replies?
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10-28-03, 07:21 AM | #10 | ||||||
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^lol^
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10-28-03, 02:22 PM | #11 | ||||
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This was Nice
Long but nice, ..used some good, immagery... and some nice vocab..flow was ok on point.. and this was worth to read oldo its long as Damn! But Who wrote what..lol^^
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10-28-03, 03:32 PM | #12 | ||||||
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it dosent matter who wrote what,
its a collab, collabs are s'posed to be dope as a whole thats what matters = ) |
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