Biasi - First Proper Beat

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/biasimusic.htm

Called Dark, Funky, Piano - 3rd Beat but first actual one

thing is cant edit cos lost serial for FLstudio4 so have to export tracks (flaw in unregistered version) instead of saving

Help is appreciated, where to go better etc...

not feelin' this.... it just sounds weird to me...

weird?? right cheers for reply i suppose anyway,

any pointers on how to improve my stuff??

sup,

drums - sequence was aight. quality of the hits could be a bit better.
piano - uugh...too repetitive and too many notes. if u'r goin to go with a melody where the same note hits rapiditly like that i'd take out a note here and there. and maybe throw sum reverb on the piano, it's a bit dry.
bass - I wouldn't recomend having the bass identical to the piano melody. on this beat just a one note hit at the beginning of each chord would prolly be better.

Not trying to discourage u cause u'r new too making beats, but try spending a little time just writin ur melodies. everything else can be layed out farily simple if the melody is dope enough to carry the track. keep at it. pc

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