^^^hey i can relate....i dropped mad weak on the battle in my sig....

as a matter a fact look at that!....it still is running and it needs a vote......

and imagine this.....seein as how i voted fairly here....u should do the same there.....g what a coincidence huh?....amazing....pc*1*

uppin 5................................................. ............................................

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

aight we are uupin............................................. .................................................. ....

You Couldnt Comprehend Fire...If You Were Surounded By Gay Men
^Whoever thinks thats a punch is a dumbass.

You're Fallin Faster Than Leaves Of Fall Trees Bein Shaken
^WHOA!! Yea right.. a played lil topic with a simple example.

Rhymes Couldn't Get To A Climax If You Set A Match On The G Spot
You Aint Got The Heat To Lock A Win... I Merked You Wit A Key Shot
^Wack ass hell set-up, i dunno how many times i heard that, the punch was ight nothing creative.

Prewritten To The Grave... And You Still Aint Copped A Win
What Makes You Think This Is Gon Be Different?... Your Battlin A Veteran
^OUCH!!, haha yea right, wack as hell, a big ego line for a punch

Look At Your Style You're Bringin A New Meanin To The Word Throw Back
Rockin A Pac Avy Aint Been In Since Michael Jackson Was Still Black
^Tight ass hell closer, best lines in whole verse, everything else was wack.

U didnt have flow either...


my record is 0-2, with 2 hurtins......(NOT!)/
well imma even this out against u and kclipz 4 murkin/
^Lol, shit was funny.

ill leave u sad and hummbled, so u can go onto OPRAH/
and talk about how a lightweight flowed ya(up)/
^I found this funny, shit was nice. Simple yet funny.

im gonna make u turn around ur intrest and occupation/
so u can go join the herb garden......a HUGE adaptation!/
^Nothing special...

heres a "TOKEN" of my appretiation/
its to hot to say, so imma leave it in abbreviations........FU/
^Tight closer, shit made me laugh...

Ur flow was better thans Token, ur format wasen't. u had better punches, token didnt,

BirdRaw wins...

aight we're still uppin for more votes............................................. ..................................

aight anymore votes on this battle............................................ ......................

yeah token u came super weak in this battle

personals=tie
flow=tbird
metas=token
punches=tbird
effort=tbird

my vote=tbird.............no hate

k i really wasnt feelin either of these....iunno they juz seem way small for battle lines....iunno

token- Rhymes Couldn't Get To A Climax If You Set A Match On The G Spot
You Aint Got The Heat To Lock A Win... I Merked You Wit A Key Shot

Birdy- heres a "TOKEN" of my appretiation/
its to hot to say, so imma leave it in abbreviations........FU/
^everyone agrees on that bein hot lol

opener:tie both was weak
closer:birdy
structure:tie
punches:token
wordplay:token
overall:token

indeed yo
token better punches
better personals
thats about it the rest was an even tie

overal-token

hit this up honestly yall

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6845#post866845

thanks peace