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Old 05-13-03, 05:52 PM   #1
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Lightbulb Posting Something To Make You Think...

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Hope you all dig what's said...
Maybe some of you all can relate...

Beat...
Thumping...
Now...

Sitting here with my Beck's, I only drink German beer...
As I sit and drink I start to think, Why the fuck am I here?
Cause you guys are young, quick, and handy with a lyrical knife...
But you haven't been here long, you can't sing this song, you've never lived my life.

Born to Kill was born to be billed, by his fucked up folks...
They did things to me, that you can't concieve, you'd probably think they're jokes.
The tax that I paid, left me decayed, warping my young mind...
They created a monster who went on a rampage, on society I dined.

If you weren't with me you were the enemy, that's something you wouldn't desire...
I've sunk a knife, swung a bat, along with the guns I've fired.
But like a mad man with a bad fan, stuck in Texas heat...
Sweat drops every time you cough and eventually you get beat.

Locked in a cell I went through hell, fighting to keep my pride.
A punch in the face, a shank just in case, my ass never took a ride!
Then all of a sudden I look in the mirror and see no bars in the background.
For years I've been free, it's 2003, and now there's family sounds.

I've got a wife! I've got a kid! I've gotta keep shit tight!
Can't go back to that, can't carry the gat. But what exactly's right?
Hugs and smiles, laughter from your child, fucking the hell out of your spouse!
Busting decisions on a domestic mission, making ends by clicking a mouse.

Don't think I don't know, this is how rodents go, another rat in the system's race...
But I'm chill with this, keep that number on my back, even though there's no chance for first place.
Do my best to lay to rest, the darkness once held dear...
Still, after all this, the answer was missed...Why the fuck am I here?

Peace
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Old 05-13-03, 06:10 PM   #2
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ill drop man had a couple good metas and similies i liked
nice flow easy to catch on to it was good shit

only to give critisism which is what we usually want id say that it was a bit simple, but i dont think it needed to be nemore complex then it was for this piece
of course everything can be better tho
good drop i liked it!
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Old 05-13-03, 06:14 PM   #3
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Yeah this was Deep ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, I liked it dawg...........Nice concept...............Overall u get a 8/10
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Old 07-29-03, 03:44 PM   #4
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Man...

I forgot I'd written this shit...

Time fuckin flies...
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Old 07-29-03, 03:55 PM   #5
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WOW... this was some ill shit... i cant quote any parts cuz the whole fucking thing was hott. nice shit playa u got MAD SKILLS...

Flow wa perfect and the vocab was CRAZY...

Overall-9.5/10

Can u return the fav on my freestyel called... "Like Mults"
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Old 10-09-03, 03:24 PM   #6
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This was one of my first ever...

Bringing it back from the dead now that ya'll know me more...

Check it out, will ya.
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Old 10-09-03, 06:28 PM   #7
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This was good^^

To the point,..and ur personal aspects, pointin out u really relate to the things u spit, ..and that are things i like in a drop, ...real,...things, ...vocab,structure,and shit dsnt mean ne thing in this kinda drops, ...its about the contains, ...and i like the things this drop contains.

Props Bro^
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Old 10-28-03, 09:02 AM   #8
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good drop, easy on they eyes readin and had a real nice beat to it. good job on the few multis, and simis, steady flow throughout.
keep post'n an dill definitely be uppin when you post
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Old 10-28-03, 10:21 AM   #9
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i liked it, i got one like it called, "why me", i am about to post it on here now, thanks to you!!!! Hot ass flow though, i liked it
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Old 10-28-03, 11:53 AM   #10
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Man, B and Nas...

Thanks much, peeps.

The props is very appreciated.

And, Nas, glad ta be an inspiration.

Means alot.

Peace
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Old 10-28-03, 11:58 AM   #11
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This is good, great job sir
Your verse in the SS was good as well
but I think this one is better...
Can you return the favor, in my sig it says the last mile...thats the one i have against you in SS...so if you dont want to check that then go to then next from last

good luck in SS
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Old 10-28-03, 12:15 PM   #12
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Thanks Realist...

I'll peep some of those for ya...

Much respect...

Thanks for liking my verses.

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Old 10-28-03, 12:17 PM   #13
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Yo this was good yo i liked it on a scale it would get a 9.5
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Old 10-28-03, 12:18 PM   #14
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Holla at my drop
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Old 10-28-03, 09:37 PM   #15
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not bad
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