5-7 bars
no hate
crew
or d'r votes
explained votes
no freepostin

check in and spit

i got more dules no rapping off my rap

also 7 bars not 7 lines

actually you should spit fist becuz you called out but i will

post upi in 45 mins if not dq

post by 7pm

ha ha ha Hitz is back

look bitch you cant hang wit my "vocbulary"
im gonna take you out like i did the "constabulary'', 1
head up off my "block"
and get off my "cock"
cuz its swinging like a grandfather "clock",
ha ha ha get "bitch"
if not youll be sleeping with the rest of those "snitches",
nigga you aint "diZasterous"
bitch you "advantagous", 2
you beatin me thats fictionary,
get off your ass and get a dictionary.
constabulary- police force
advantageous giving me adavantge

i sed seven bars, but wutever, ill spit now, and since u sed it, no spitttin of my rap

146 posts and no battles yet u shood get off the net//
i think this "dog" is sick, he needs to see a "vet"//
imma let this dude try to spit his wackk ass verse//
cuz i immurge~the~curse and splurge~the~thurst//
when i spit the sickness, i let go the wickedness//
ur on my hit list, imma split~this dude, this mis~fit//
imma hit~this~bitch and throw him a punch~for~lunch//
his moms tits~i~hit, this dude crunches~his~bunches//
of nuts on other dudes' butts,have a hunch, hes gunna lose//
im the bearer of bad news, 'sorry your son's dead", the blues//
is what ur family's gunna munch, this dude the lunch~truck//
i mean fuck, how many guys u gunna feed their need, good luck//
u better duck when i come around,or ull be buried in the ground//
ur bdy parts never found, this dude's takin it pound~4~pound//

hold on dude, honkee leave me alone, you right im the big dogg so give me the bone. i meant 8 oclock because i cant count i said 45 mins tho s o you no what i mean.

wut u sayin, ur postin a line after i spit, wutever, and i sed no rappin off my verse, so this dont even count, and im gunna leave it at 7 cuz i dont need an 8th

uppin 4 votes

i know dumbass i just said that fir fun

that shit dont count damn honkees these days

Flow-DiZ
Metas-DiZ
Vocab-DiZ (Advantagous aint a word or it aint spelled right at all)
Structure-DiZ
Personals-DiZ

Somebody gotta elevate the fuck up...it was DiZasterous!

advantagous is a word jackass i just had it for a spellinf word and loomk i got the def.....

Definitions of advantageous:


adjective: giving an advantage
Example: "A contract advantageous to our country



so what now bitch............

Hits your ideas were good.... It looks like you have some potential, you got good vocab, you just have to turn them into longer punchlines and better personals

Hitz = Flow
Diz = Everything Else

Hits please vote on this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=89069

guess what???

dizastur : put it this way you had no sense of flow
al yo shit wa fukked up
it aint even make snese like this for ex:

imma hit~this~bitch and throw him a punch~for~lunch//
his moms tits~i~hit, this dude crunches~his~bunches//

like dude that aint ake no snese

hitz:

this was a ok verse it wasnt the best i senn from a noob but it was ok

the part i like the bbest was the end

you beatin me thats fictionary,
get off your ass and get a dictionary


like that guy said advantagous is a word



so whe win is going to hitz

this was a merking dizasterous took this wit ease better wordplay flow and structure............my vote=dizasterous

first of all, rated r's vote didnt even count cuz he only has six posts, u need 100 to vote, read the rules u stupid fucker, so the score is 2-0 me, and second of all, rated, do u even know how to rap, actually i already know the answer

uppin 4 votes

shut the hell up i know his shit dont count honkee he just probuly put that cuz mines was better and u no it ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,